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I've listed this article for peer review because I think it would need to be a part of a planned featured topic on Dwarf planets. So I would need to bring this article to GA-class. What is it missing?

Thanks, Nergaal (talk) 20:14, 4 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Ruslik:

1) The table is too overwhelming. I think the images of planets/dwarf planets should be removed from it—this will make the table more compact.

2) The lead does not summarize the article, it contains information that is mentioned nowhere in the main text. I suggest moving it into the main part of the article and writing a new lead, which, in addition, should be shorter.

3) Some paragraphs are uncited. As I remember, Jewitt and Brown wrote something about classification of the planets. Their works should be cited as well.

Ruslik (talk) 12:29, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]