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Dayton, Ohio

A decent article so far, what can be done to improve it? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 11kowrom (talk • contribs) .

• References for one. Also, there are a lot of lists that should be turned into prose where ever possible. Pentawing^Talk 04:54, 5 June 2006 (UTC)

1.  Convert lists to prose
2.  Fix red links
3. Expand lead
4. Dayton Peace Accords - expand this section
5. Add footnotes, references. See WP:FOOTNOTE
6. Check spelling, grammar, prose

— Wackymacs 11:06, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

The appropriate fixes have since been made.Texas141 (talk) 14:46, 24 April 2010 (UTC)