Wikipedia:Peer review/Eaton Canyon/archive1

I'd like a fresh set of eyeballs to help me improve this article. Thanks. --evrik ^(talk) 18:10, 31 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Well, it seems that no one else is stepping up to the plate, so I'll take a whack at it.

Some of the paragraphs in the history section could be merged, one and two-sentence paragraphs are generally undesirable.
the canyon falls under several governmental jurisdictions What are they?
Not all the landmarks should have their own section, consider maybe an "other landmarks" subsection to avoid having sections with only a few sentences.
The nature center is unique in the area because it houses exhibits that educate on the flora and fauna local to the San Gabriel Valley Southern California. This sentence is very awkward.
The falls are where the Eaton Creek has a fifty foot drop and are located north of the bridge in the part of the canyon administered by the US Forest Service This can also be worded better.

Hope this helps, contact me here or on my talk page if you have questions/comments. -Running On Brains 11:30, 30 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]