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I've listed this article for peer review because… If you look through the recent history, you will see that I have substantially reorganised and wikified the article. I am attempting to add as many citations as necessary to back up the article, although I seem to be coming up with the same sources for several facts (which I'm not overly keen on).

I'd very much like to have some suggesttions in what direction to take this article now - what bits still need work, what bits need cleaning up, and anything else I might have missed. The article was pretty poor before I made changes to it and I'd like to continue to improve it.


Many thanks, Howie 02:54, 16 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

That should help improve the article a little. All the best. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:07, 19 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much for your comments and suggestions. I've been doing my best to implement them. One thing I am stuck on is how to expand the lead section. I'm not entirely sure what information I can add that would expand it, that isn't already in the rest of the article. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! Howie 13:05, 21 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]