Wikipedia:Peer review/Floyd Mayweather Jr./archive1

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Floyd Mayweather Jr.[edit]

I've spent the last two weeks expanding, rewriting, and citing this article. I've also turned 14 red links into blue ones so that there are no red links on the page. I want to get this article listed as a good article. -ArcTheLad 03:11, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

It looks pretty good overall. The statistics in first paragraph should be accompanied by a date: I expect he won't be number one forever, and might not remain undefeated. The page is mixing units: in the olympics the featherweight division is listed in kg, but the remainder of the page uses lb. (You could, for example, also list lbs. in parentheses next to the kg rating.) KOs should be linked. I'm somewhat surprised that there isn't a page to link for world boxing championship, although there is the Category:World boxing champions. Thanks. — RJH 15:48, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
I've slightly altered the first paragraph, and it now has the dates. I added a footnote for the Olympic metric usage. KOs is linked. I linked 'world boxing championships' to List of current world boxing champions. Thanks. ArcTheLad 01:19, 9 May 2006 (UTC)
I'm impressed (You motivated me do the same with Marvin Hagler, now, if I have the time) Although other good articles contain more pictures, but overall a vast improvement from before. Maya Levy 06:01, 20 June 2006 (UTC)
Gracias mi amiga. ArcTheLad 07:30, 20 June 2006 (UTC)