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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like comments and feedback to improve this article towards FA, or at least GA.

Thanks, JDC808 (talk) 05:58, 2 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • In the fourth paragraph of the first section, you need to use either spaced n-dashes or unspaced m-dashes
 Done
    • I played the first game and the second game years ago, but I believe that there are chests which switches the colour, and if the character grabs the chest in the right time it will stop colorizing
 Done You're right. I forgot about those. Checked the God of War Wikia to confirm which games have them. Only the first two do.
    • You may add that the sex minigame is censored (at least it is so in the first game)
 Done I didn't like the word censored because it makes me think that you can kinda see it, but areas are blurred out or have a black bar across it. I've reworded the mention of it. How is it now?
    • A problem is that you use the brackets too much. Try to avoid them.
 Done I went through the article and removed as many as I could, unless I thought they were necessary. How is it now?
FA is what I meant lol. I had put a Peer Review up for the character page and it used FL which is why I accidentally mentioned it here. Thanks for the comments and looking forward to any other feedback. JDC808 (talk) 06:46, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]