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Luís Figo

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I've listed this article for peer review because i think that this is a good articule.

Thanks, Sdrtirs (talk) 04:13, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

Indeed, a good article but plenty of room for improvement.

• "considered by some second only to Eusebio as Portugal’s greatest player ever" in the lead. Without citation, and then not in the main article. This is WP:OR I'm afraid unless you can cite it.
• Golden Boy in the lead points to a disambiguation page, and is never discussed again so needs citation and disambiguation.
• "exceptional trickery " in the lead needs evidence otherwise it's too much of a point of view.
• en-dash should be used for season separation, e.g. 1998–99 instead of 1998-99.
• Be consistent with the way seasons are represented - use en-dash instead of slash.
• Simply not enough references - seven for a player like this? I'd expect 70... Plus use the {{cite web}} template.
• Avoid in-line linking like the link to antifigo.com.
• The bullet point list of successes is not good - prose is generally the way foreward. However, the bogus struck through text should go no matter what!

A lot of work to do before the article can progress, most importantly with referencing the claims in the article. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:39, 20 March 2008 (UTC)