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Nolan Godfrey

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I've listed this article for peer review because…It may be suitable, if peer editors agree so, for a higher grade and listing in the groups it is part of.

Thanks, Andythomas2011Andrew Thomas 07:24, 10 April 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Not sure this is an "arts" PR, but anyway...
All references need to be reformatted to avoid bare URLs, they need titles, publication dates, etc.
Avoid links like the one you have for "MTV's Teen Wolf " in the middle of prose.
Avoid # to mean "number" in prose.
"UMass Amherst" use the full title.
" 9-3 " use en-dash per WP:DASH, see many other issues on the article.
"Semi-final" why is "Semi" capitalised?
" (see Table 1.0 below)." what?!
"through his company, FaceOff Club. US Lacrosse has invited him to be a featured speaker at their 2011 National Convention in Baltimore and he returned again to speak in 2012.[23] Godfrey's business pursuits extend also to Claddagh Lacrosse and Southern Combat Lacrosse." again, too many links here which aren't in-line refs.
Statistics section, are the tables compliant with MOS:DTT so that screen-readers can read the information?

The Rambling Man (talk) 20:14, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]