Wikipedia:Peer review/Raidou (DOA)/archive1
Yet another article I had created during my massive overhall in improving the articles on the DOA characters, this was one I had made from scratch, with (surprisingly) little revision by other editors. I would like this article to be reviewed, but more specifically, I would like the personality section I made commented on, as well as the peronality sections I made for the other characters in DOA in thier respective articles. Thanks (again) for your time.-MegamanZero 18:27 29, November 2005 (UTC)
- I retract some of my statement above. Upon loking at the history, I see no other editors have edited the article at all!-MegamanZero 18:35 29, November 2005 (UTC)
- Here are my comments:
- What references did you use to write this article? (list any newspapers, websites, articles, books that were used)
- The Statistics section should not list the N/A ones, and that information should be moved into an infobox with the picture.
- The image is awfully bit-mapped, can you find a better quality one?
- The Dead or Alive section is sort of short.
- The lead doesn't tell the reader much about the character. The lead paragraph should summarize the entire article.