Wikipedia:Peer review/Remora/archive1

Remora

I did a lot of work getting this article filled out. It could still use some more citations, but I would say it's making it's way to featured article status and would like input. --Chinasaur 22:02, 22 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I think you need a list of references. The way I see it, the notes section is used to highlight and/or clarify a specific point, which you have done, whereas a references section just lists all your sources clearly and concisely. Otherwise looking good so far.--Xiphon 08:23, 24 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I'll see what I can do. May not be able to fill things in until the weekend. Thanks! --Chinasaur

I think you have a good article there! However, I think it needs a lead section. The section that's there is too big and technical, and contains material that's not expanded later on; the lead is supposed to be a summary of information that's explained in more detail in the article proper WP:LEAD. Maybe that section could be split up, too.

Looks to me like the Notes section is actually a list of References - I'm thinking you could rename that section. There's a bug in the formatting of the notes list, which I think is actually in the gutenberg template...? But overall, this article shows the work that's gone into it -- well done! --Johantheghost 15:53, 2 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I've collected the information to make this quite a nice article, particularly a lot of good stuff collected from doi:10.1139/Z02-031. Once I find time to put this in and clean things up I think I will put in a featured article request. --Chinasaur 12:30, 3 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]