Wikipedia:Peer review/Smash Hit/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking for feedback before nominating the article for WP:FAC. I'm open to getting any feedback on how to improve the article, particularly the prose. Thanks, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 10:55, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
750h
[edit]Thank you so much bringing one of the most nostalgic video games to GA (but i don't remember ever making it to the end [if there even is one])! hope we'll see this on the main page soon!
- lead
- Smash Hit received positive reviews, with reviewers praising its... i'd make this "Smash Hit received positive reviews; critics praised its.."
- gameplay
- Smash Hit uses 3D graphics and has also been categorised as an action and puzzle game. remove "also"
- After its release, Smash Hit had different game modes introduced remove "introduced"
- The game does not count the player's score but rather counts the distance covered. ==> "The game does not count the player's score but the distance covered."
- development and release
- No problems here
- reception
- described the glass shattering mechanic as add a hyphen between "glass" and "shattering"
- Trevor Sheridan of AppleNApps said that the game stands by its name, but he underlined the game's difficulty when moving through narrow spaces; Pocket Gamer also named Smash Hit as one of the hardest mobile video games. i'd split this into two sentences, into AppleNApps' review and Pocket Gamer's
- for Independent Games Festival's 2015 Main add "the" before "Independent"
- legacy
- No problems here.
Thanks for the article, overall a nice read. Excited to see this at FAC, @Vacant0:! 750h+ 12:13, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks for the review. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 22:04, 3 September 2024 (UTC)