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Smash Hit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking for feedback before nominating the article for WP:FAC. I'm open to getting any feedback on how to improve the article, particularly the prose. Thanks, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 10:55, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

750h

Thank you so much bringing one of the most nostalgic video games to GA (but i don't remember ever making it to the end [if there even is one])! hope we'll see this on the main page soon!

lead

Smash Hit received positive reviews, with reviewers praising its... i'd make this "Smash Hit received positive reviews; critics praised its.."

gameplay

Smash Hit uses 3D graphics and has also been categorised as an action and puzzle game. remove "also"
After its release, Smash Hit had different game modes introduced remove "introduced"
The game does not count the player's score but rather counts the distance covered. ==> "The game does not count the player's score but the distance covered."

development and release

No problems here

reception

described the glass shattering mechanic as add a hyphen between "glass" and "shattering"
Trevor Sheridan of AppleNApps said that the game stands by its name, but he underlined the game's difficulty when moving through narrow spaces; Pocket Gamer also named Smash Hit as one of the hardest mobile video games. i'd split this into two sentences, into AppleNApps' review and Pocket Gamer's
for Independent Games Festival's 2015 Main add "the" before "Independent"

legacy

No problems here.

Thanks for the article, overall a nice read. Excited to see this at FAC, @Vacant0:! 750 h+ 12:13, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks for the review. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 22:04, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]