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Terms of Endearment (The X-Files)[edit]

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I've never done a Featured Article before and wanted the opinions of more experienced editors to scrutinize the article a bit more before nominating it. It's a pretty straight-forward article, apart of a long series of FA articles related to the X-Files.

Thanks, Bruce Campbell (talk) 01:43, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

TRLIJC19 (talkcontribs) 00:17, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Lead
    • Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK.
    • It would probably be better to leave it as "Fox Broadcasting Company", the official title, rather than piping the link.
    • "The episode received received mixed to positive reviews from critics, with the performance given by guest actor Bruce Campbell attracting most of the positive reception." -- Why is 'received' typed twice?
    • ""Terms of Endearment" was the first episode written by The X-Files executive story editor David Amann, a staff member who later became a regular contributor to the series." -- "[...] written by The X-Files executive [...]" should be "[...] written by The X-Files' executive [...]".
    • "Amann was inspired to a write a story that was "Rosemary's Baby in reverse"." -- Why the 'a' after 'to' and before 'write'?
    • The two pieces of quoted material in P3 of the lead need citations directly after them.

I have to go out right now, so I'll finish off the rest of the article later today. TRLIJC19 (talkcontribs) 16:55, 23 September 2012 (UTC)