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Venous lake

Any feedback you can provide to make this article better would be greatly appreciated!

I looked over the article this morning and wikified it quite a bit. It reads like a medical journal (less now than before, though). Try to make it at least somewhat layman-friendly (ie. "Etiology" -> "Causation"). Also, this needs to be expanded, it's basically a stub with three images. How about adding an infobox for skin diseases to this and other related pages so people can see the article in the larger context. That would make the length more acceptable (I am not aware of a whole lot more that can be added, and have it remain encyclopaedic). I tagged the article for expansion and infobox. Nswinton 19:25, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 03:42, 7 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]