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Please, list your reviews, if possible :) --Untifler 18:07, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
- An interesting article. Some comments:
- The page needs plenty of in-line citations to back up the various facts. (Particularly if you could give sources for the legends.) Otherwise the reader has no idea how much is true, or pure hoax.
- Tatar and Turkic need to be linked.
- Please fix the multiple errors in the sentence: "It should be noted, that another peoples, that live arround Kazan, such as Chuvashes and Mari also have legends, related to Kazan's foundation, but no one refers to Kazan dragon."
- "After 16th century Russians loaned this legend from Tatars." Did you mean "acquired" this legend?
- "Sceptics": Which skeptics are they? Is there a reference?
- Thanks. — RJH 15:09, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
- The lead needs to be expanded, maybe fix the red links while you're at it. --Osbus 18:39, 23 April 2006 (UTC)