Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Jeff Hanneman
I wish to bring this up to GA status, second peer review. I have implemented all suggestions on the last peer review and have since added two new sections and more references. Thanks M3tal H3ad 08:45, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
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[edit]- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
Minor things! The article seems set for GA status. These are my remarks:
- "The two live in Los Angeles with no children, and live forty minutes away from King, and often have BBQ's". It sounds a bit repetitive to me.
- "Hanneman will come up with riffs at his house, using a 24-track and drum machine. Hanneman will show ..." Again, this could maybe be rephrased.
- Is he regarded by music critics as a good guirast, a good writer of lyrics?
- You could maybe have a caption in Hanneman's photo (I saw that it is "Jeff Hanneman performing at The Unholy Alliance tour in 2006").
- Any expansion of the "Biography" section with further info would be welcome.--Yannismarou 14:19, 9 February 2007 (UTC)