Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Nyron Nosworthy

Nyron Nosworthy

I want to make it as good as it can be. --Sunderland06 14:59, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

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• Y done The article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.^[?]
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• Y Done Please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.^[?]

Thanks, DrKiernan 15:23, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

• • Can somebody please rate this article. --Sunderland06 22:27, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

Yannismarou

• Expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
• "Sunderland" is full of choppy paragraphs making the prose choppy.
• Second half of "Sunderland" is incoherent and full of trivia.
• How many articles did you submit for peer-review? Are you sure you can work on all of them at the same time?--Yannismarou 11:37, 21 September 2007 (UTC)