Talk:Devil's Halo
Devil's Halo has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 23, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 20:13, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- This is just a personal preference, but instead of using commas, you could use a flatlist with bullet points for the "Genre" and "Producer" parameters; however, it is unnecessary and just for stylistic purposes
- Each genre listed needs to have a source; no unsourced genres in the infobox
- Everything in the infobox is based on what's cited in the article (WP:INFOBOXREF) Dan56 (talk) 00:12, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
Paragraph 2[edit]
- "The album was released on October 6, 2009, by Downtown Records and charted modestly, but was well received by most critics." --> "The album was released on October 6, 2009, by Downtown Records; it charted modestly and was well received by most music critics."
- Please link "music critics" to the article for "Music journalism"
Background[edit]
- "Ndegéocello spent over a year writing the songs from Devil's Halo, being inspired in part by her trip to Ireland. "I went to a couple of pubs and there were much older gentlemen playing the guitar and just singing these amazing, simple songs", Ndegéocello recalled." --> "Ndegéocello spent over a year writing the songs from Devil's Halo, being inspired in part by her trip to Ireland: "I went to a couple of pubs and there were much older gentlemen playing the guitar and just singing these amazing, simple songs", Ndegéocello recalled."
Music and lyrics[edit]
Paragraph 1[edit]
- Please remove the link to the article for "fusion (music)"
Paragraph 2[edit]
- "For the song "Slaughter", tried to weave together sonic influences from the producers Trevor Horn and RZA, as well as the bands Yes, Sade, and The Human League" --> Reword please; the first part doesn't make sense to me
Release and reception[edit]
- Please add the Metacritic score to the "Professional Ratings" box
- That would be overemphasis of one source/point of view, IMO (WP:CRIT#Neutrality and verifiability), as well as redundancy; it's already discussed in detail in the section. Dan56 (talk) 00:20, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 1[edit]
- "featuring some of Ndegéocello's most strongest compositions yet.[22]" --> "featuring some of Ndegéocello's strongest compositions yet.[22]"
- Please insert a "the" in between "According to Q," and "songs expressing frantic feelings..."
Charts[edit]
- Please use the correct chart format per Template:Album chart
References[edit]
- "reflist" --> "Reflist|30em"
End of GA Review:[edit]
Great work! An all–in–all well–written article! On hold for seven days to allow for changes. Please @PING me with any questions, comments, or concerns. Thanks and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 20:33, 22 June 2016 (UTC).
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