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This article is editorialised and does not read like an encyclopedia entry. It seems like it has been lifted from a biography or a magazine article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.37.186.94 (talk) 23:37, 27 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

FWIW this has been completely re-written now. Anotherclown (talk) 02:24, 21 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]