Talk:The Beguiling

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Move to Mirvish Village[edit]

This article is misleading re when the store moved to Mirvish Village. It was already located in the two-storey there as early as the fall of 1996 (I know, because I began shopping there regularly my first year of university there), before it was sold to its subsequent owners. I couldn't tell you what date the move was.

I'd be happy to edit it so that the timeline was clear, but without a citation, I'm not going to just make stuff up. As written, it doesn't actually say that it moved after being sold---it's ambiguous, as are the sources I can find. A reference with the move date would be most helpful. CüRlyTüRkeyTalkContribs 02:28, 16 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Beguiling/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 12:02, 6 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take this one, Curly--sorry you've had to wait so long for a review on it. Comments to follow in a minute. -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:02, 6 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, this looks solid and essentially ready to pass. I've made some tweaks as I went; feel free to revert any with which you disagree and we can discuss. Only two points I see that need attention:

  • "and by Drawn and Quarterly." this probably needs citation.
  • "and the Joe Shuster Awards' Harry Kremer Retailer Award in 2010" --it doesn't look like this second one was also shared; this should probably be clarified.

Thanks for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:18, 6 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

That'll do it, then. All other criteria checked and satisfactory; thanks for another quality contribution. -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:05, 8 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]