Talk:The Lottery (2010 film)

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[1][2][3][4][5][6][7][8][9][10][11][12][13][14][15][16][17][18][19][20][21][22][23][24] Fences&Windows 17:57, 17 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

my edits on 6-18-10[edit]

Thank you for your editing. I tweaked a few items: The film is on charters in the context of the total public educational system, so I re-added the mention of public schools. I referred to the teachers' union rather than a teaching union, since the principals' union could also be considered a teaching union, but that's not the union that's the source of opposition on point. I edited a reference to the N.Y. Post to the non-template style because I'm not familiar with the template style and if you couldn't indicate the author's qualification and that someone provided additional reporting I assume the template didn't support those and describing that person as a coauthor is not what the publisher specified (I reaccessed the page today), so, for accuracy's sake, I used the non-template form, but updated the access date to yours. I edited the Variety reference to the non-template style to support pointing out that the article preceded the film's release (I don't know how to do that in the template), corrected the publication date (I reaccessed the source today), and updated the access date to yours. I corrected Daily Post to Daily News. I corrected Errol's name, added links, fixed a broken link (it was missing a bracket) and sidestepped a disambiguation page, removed a redundant link, added a category for Education in Manhattan to go with Education in the Bronx, decapitalized "Editor in chief" to conform to the articles on Susan Taylor and Essence, clarified a phrase (adding "charter"), and, minor, fixed a link to avoid a redirect, decapitalized a nontitular word, combined two paragraphs, edited one verb for consistency of tense, spaced list items, and added one serial comma. I'm glad you fixed my single-quotation-mark problems and what was probably my defaultsort error. Overall, the recent edits preceding mine are very helpful; there are a lot of good improvements. Thanks again. Nick Levinson (talk) 16:39, 18 June 2010 (UTC) Corrected 1 typo: Nick Levinson (talk) 16:48, 18 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]