Template:Did you know nominations/Frederic Hauge

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:30, 20 August 2013 (UTC)

Frederic Hauge[edit]

Frederic Hauge

5x expanded by Oceanh (talk), Mariordo (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 13:41, 16 August 2013 (UTC).

  • New and long enough (allthough the subject might well have deserved a little more), hook fine. Photo is fine (Commons, says crediting is needed.) All paragraphs sourced, partly in Norwegian which I can read. There is a small issue of close paraphrasing in the last paragraph that I would like to see solved. Iselilja (talk) 16:43, 17 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the review. I have removed the last paragraph. Someone might like to include an adapted version of the text later. Oceanh (talk) 11:04, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
Thank you. I don't think the last paragraph is essential information, so the article can be OK-ed without it. The article is rather short compared to all the info that exist on Hauge, but as long as the most essential information is included I believe that is enough to satisfy the DYK completeness rule. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 11:15, 18 August 2013 (UTC)