Template:Did you know nominations/Melly Goeslaw
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:23, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
Melly Goeslaw[edit]
... that Indonesia's "most sought after movie songwriter" started her career by writing about flatulence and sexual deviancy?
- Comment: By my count this is a 62x expansion.
Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 08:13, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Addiction to Mountain Dew
It would be a great hook but I'm a little concerned that the source says "perhaps the most sought-after songwriter by Indonesian filmmakers today" (emphasis mine) and that the source regarding flatulence does not seem to mention it. violet/riga [talk] 14:53, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- Regarding the source, it says "farting". I changed it to flatulence as fart isn't very encyclopedic. Will double check the "most sought after" bit. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:52, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- The linked source does not appear to say "farting" either. violet/riga [talk] 16:11, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for spotting that. Fixed. Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:18, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
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- ... that one of Indonesia's "most sought-after movie songwriters" started her career by writing about flatulence and sexual deviancy?
- Might be better. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:56, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
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