Template:Did you know nominations/Peggy Baker

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:08, 4 April 2015 (UTC)

Peggy Baker

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• ... that Peggy Baker was the National Ballet School of Canada's first artist-in-residence?

• ALT1: ... that Peggy Baker was a member of Mikhail Baryshnikov's dance company the White Oak Dance Project?
• ALT2: ...that Peggy Baker was a member of the Lar Lubovitch Dance Company?

Created by Z1720 (talk). Self nominated at 07:46, 8 March 2015 (UTC).

Interesting personality, on good sources. Article: please reorganize, have a short lead, put most of the present in career and recognition, tone down to more factual (we don't need "finest and most prominent"), - later decide what should go to the lead as most essential. - You can't say "future husband" of someone who died, no? - The hooks are ok, but not too exciting yet, try something more specific please, perhaps around Lubovitch. His company has a much better article than the White Oak. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:40, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

The article has been fixed up by other gracious editors. I added a second alternative to the proposal about the Lar Lubovitch Dance Company. If you can find something more exciting, please let me know. Z1720 (talk) 20:25, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, ALT2 preferred, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:58, 3 April 2015 (UTC)