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References are posted again in correct way.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kayharris (talk • contribs) 03:54, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Sudhun Gali image
Could someone explain why this image of a house is relevant to this article about the Sudhun tribe. In the meantime, I have moved the image so that the text of the lead section is not squashed between two images (see MOS:IMAGES for the guideline mentioning this). Astronaut (talk) 11:51, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
Quotes in lead section
When including quotes, it is useful to separate them from the flow of the text so they can be more easily read and identified as a quote. However, I think it is preferable to write your own words and cite the source text as a reference. Astronaut (talk) 12:02, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
Anti-Pakistan and Sensationalism of this article
"""Literacy rate in Azad Kashmir soars to 78 percent, leaving the rest of Pakistan behind [16]. The Sudhun tribe in particularly is well educated composing of high literacy rates both among its female and male members."""
I only came across this by accident, but I'm glad I did, the Wikipedia editors have been notified about the false information and hate that has been written in this article. Allow me to explain.
- Literacy Rate
There are several districts within Pakistan which have above 90% literacy rates just thought I would point that out. And doesn't this just sum up just how ridiuclous this article is? Secondly, define "literacy", according to the UN. Third, what does Azad Kashmir have to do with Sudhuns?
- Geographical Distribution
How can the geographical distribution of this family be determined when an official number is not even mentioned? New York, California? They didn't get there because Obama invited them, try and explain why and how they are in America. It has something to do along the lines of IMMIGRATION and MAKING ENDS MEET!
- False Information
The history seems sketchy, who wrote this article I want to talk to you or at least by e-mail because I've heard something else. This just seems like wishful thinking.
The overall article is just so fabricated and patethically written, as if they were trying to sell the family. Please learn to write Wikipedia articles in accordance to the rules, primarily by not fabricating information and claiming things which have not happened in the past. We're just embarassing ourselves!
Jawad Khan —Preceding unsigned comment added by MirNaveed (talk • contribs) 19:29, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
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