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*Drive-by comment (not a full review): (1) "only desert in New England" does not appear in the article, and needs to before this hook can be approved; (2) quora is not a reliable source, and neither is the YouTube video used as a reference in the article. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 02:13, 20 February 2023 (UTC) |
*Drive-by comment (not a full review): (1) "only desert in New England" does not appear in the article, and needs to before this hook can be approved; (2) quora is not a reliable source, and neither is the YouTube video used as a reference in the article. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 02:13, 20 February 2023 (UTC) |
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* {{edit conflict}} [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] {{u|AverageEstoniaEnthusiast}} Welcome. Regarding the hook it is catchy and would be a quirky hook, however it needs to be in the article. The article has the correct inline citations and is neutral. Recently promoted to GA so it fits our criteria for inclusion. First DYK nomination so a QPQ is not needed. Since there is no RS which states the hook it needs a reference. The article and hook are interesting. In addition to the hook I have a concern about a copyright violation, the detector picks up. [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Desert%20of%20Maine See here]. [[User:Bruxton|Bruxton]] ([[User talk:Bruxton|talk]]) 02:17, 20 February 2023 (UTC) |
* {{edit conflict}} [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] {{u|AverageEstoniaEnthusiast}} Welcome. Regarding the hook it is catchy and would be a quirky hook, however it needs to be in the article. The article has the correct inline citations and is neutral. Recently promoted to GA so it fits our criteria for inclusion. First DYK nomination so a QPQ is not needed. Since there is no RS which states the hook it needs a reference. The article and hook are interesting. In addition to the hook I have a concern about a copyright violation, the detector picks up. [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Desert%20of%20Maine See here]. [[User:Bruxton|Bruxton]] ([[User talk:Bruxton|talk]]) 02:17, 20 February 2023 (UTC) |
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*Noted, I will address your comments once I have some time to do so. - [[User:AverageEstoniaEnthusiast|AverageEstoniaEnthusiast]] ([[User talk:AverageEstoniaEnthusiast|talk]]) 03:41, 19 February 2023 (UTC) |
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Desert of Maine
Desert Of Maine
- ... that the Desert of Maine is the only "desert" in New England? Source: https://www.quora.com/Which-state-in-New-England-has-a-desert
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Improved to Good Article status by AverageEstoniaEnthusiast (talk). Self-nominated at 23:33, 19 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Desert of Maine; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Drive-by comment (not a full review): (1) "only desert in New England" does not appear in the article, and needs to before this hook can be approved; (2) quora is not a reliable source, and neither is the YouTube video used as a reference in the article. —David Eppstein (talk) 02:13, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
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AverageEstoniaEnthusiast Welcome. Regarding the hook it is catchy and would be a quirky hook, however it needs to be in the article. The article has the correct inline citations and is neutral. Recently promoted to GA so it fits our criteria for inclusion. First DYK nomination so a QPQ is not needed. Since there is no RS which states the hook it needs a reference. The article and hook are interesting. In addition to the hook I have a concern about a copyright violation, the detector picks up. See here. Bruxton (talk) 02:17, 20 February 2023 (UTC) - Noted, I will address your comments once I have some time to do so. - AverageEstoniaEnthusiast (talk) 03:41, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
