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:{{re|Crisco 1492}} I've expanded the lede of the article, but I might need some help finding interesting part of the article other than the BLPed hook. Regards, [[User talk:Jeromi Mikhael|Jeromi Mikhael]] 12:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC) |
:{{re|Crisco 1492}} I've expanded the lede of the article, but I might need some help finding interesting part of the article other than the BLPed hook. Regards, [[User talk:Jeromi Mikhael|Jeromi Mikhael]] 12:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC) |
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:*Maybe something like "that [[Saleh Manaf]] became Regent of Bekasi even after his party attempted to annul the results?". If we have an ALT, we can allow the admin making the queues to make the decision. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Chris Woodrich]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 13:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC) |
:*Maybe something like "that [[Saleh Manaf]] became Regent of Bekasi even after his party attempted to annul the results?". If we have an ALT, we can allow the admin making the queues to make the decision. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Chris Woodrich]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 13:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC) |
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::*{{re|Crisco 1492}} '''ALT1''': "... that [[Saleh Manaf]] was elected as the Regent of Bekasi despite being a [[dummy candidate]] in the election?" Regards, [[User talk:Jeromi Mikhael|Jeromi Mikhael]] 16:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC) |
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Saleh Manaf
- ... that during the protests against Bekasi regent Saleh Manaf, protesters sealed his office and put two goat heads in front of the door? Source: https://www.liputan6.com/news/read/107867/pintu-ruangan-bupati-bekasi-disegel-kepala-kambing
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- Comment: DYKcheck: "Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 11 edits ago on May 10, 2024"
Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 64 past nominations.
Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC).
- Comment: The Bekasi link in the hook is linked to Bekasi city instead of Bekasi Regency. I fixed it Nyanardsan (talk) 07:47, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Jeromi Mikhael: Please complete a QPQ and link to it above Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 02:14, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
@Jeromi Mikhael: Has not supplied a QPQ, so I am marking this for closure as rejected. Z1720 (talk) 00:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I've done a QPQ here! Please retract the closure. Real life got in my way. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael
New reviewer required. Z1720 (talk) 17:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems:
- Lede is quite short - should be beefed up a bit
Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- n
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: As noted above, the lede should be beefed up before this hits the main page. Also, given the recent RFC, I'm not sure focusing on the negative aspects of this BLP (i.e., the goat head protest), is going to fly on the main page. It's a very interesting fact, and supported by Liputan6, but something else may work better in the current climate. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:16, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: I've expanded the lede of the article, but I might need some help finding interesting part of the article other than the BLPed hook. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe something like "that Saleh Manaf became Regent of Bekasi even after his party attempted to annul the results?". If we have an ALT, we can allow the admin making the queues to make the decision. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 13:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: ALT1: "... that Saleh Manaf was elected as the Regent of Bekasi despite being a dummy candidate in the election?" Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 16:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)