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Walney Airport has a weather station doesn't it? [http://weather.stives-town.info/station_id_wmo.htm] <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/88.107.216.120|88.107.216.120]] ([[User talk:88.107.216.120|talk]]) 18:09, 24 September 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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==Devonshire Dock Hall== |
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After research I have found out that Devonshire Dock Hall actually is the largest shipbuilding Hall in Europe, and not the German one in [[Stralsund]], [[Germany]]. Even the official BAE website states that DDH is the largest. I have therefore reverted all the information relating to the Stralsund Shipyard. The sources stating that DDH is the largest in Europe are: |
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* [http://www.baesystems.com/Newsroom/NewsReleases/2006/press_15052006.html BAE Systems] |
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* [http://www.navalshipbuilding.co.uk/details.asp?pageID=6 Naval Shipbuilding UK] |
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* [http://www.visitcumbria.com/sl/barrow.htm Visit Cumbria] |
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* [http://www.barrowland.net/ Barrowland] |
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Barrow was founded on the iron and steel industry (plus its potential for a deep-water port and the coming of the railway to allow the export of that iron). Shipbuilding came later. I don't think the town is the administrative capital of Furness. Furness is not an administrative area.
Wind turbines
What's this about wind turbines in Morecambe Bay? Are they there now or are they just planned?
Gas being used in the generation of electricity at Barrow: I took out a sentence about this, but then I remembered that Roosecote power station was re-built a few years ago, and I have a feeling it's now a gas-fired station and presumably does therefore take gas direct from the terminal. If that's so perhaps it could be explained - with ref. to Roosecote.
Another point about the gas terminal: When such a terminal was mooted local authorities across the NW were up in arms about the possibility of having it on their doorstep; Barrow wasn't even on the list. Then along came some faceless suit from Barrow and invited BG to apply to locate it in or near the town. BG couldn't believe their luck. From having to defend their proposals and maybe engage in protracted planning and legal battles to get their way, now some numbskull, on behalf of another town, was inviting them in - needless to say they didn't have to think long about the offer. How many people does the terminal employ? If your can write this in a NPOV style then why not put it in the article. I'm afraid I can't! Arcturus 19:19, 16 September 2005 (UTC)
The turbines aren't actually in Moreca,be Bay; they're beginning construction off the coast of Walney, in the Irish sea rather than Morecambe Bay. Currently a few ships out there doing whatever it is they have to do, and if you squint you can see the bottom of the turbines beginning to stick out of the water.
The power station at Roosecote is indeed gas fired, and the gas comes from the terminals via pipes under Walney Island. I think Roosecote is considered part of Barrow, rather than a seperate place. Robdurbar 09:19, 17 September 2005 (UTC)
County Issue
I think suggesting Barrow remains in some way part of the 'ceremonial county' of Lancashire is more POV and/or incorrect than to mention that many locals do in fact consider the area should still be considered Lancastrian. I have put in as neutral a statement in the intoductory paragraph as I thought fit. But with a reasonable geography section already mentioning the Lancastrian history - it might be sensible not to have County issues raised in the first sentance describing the town Nogwa 02:07, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
- Though I agree that we shouldn't over emphasise the Lancashire issue - its a historical feature in the end, it is incorrect to suggest that the 'ceremonial counties' don't exist any longer - they do. It is, I agree, POV and probably original research to include the locals bit, without statistical support. Robdurbar 09:11, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
- While they exist, Barrow is in the ceremonial county of Cumbria - not Lancashire as the article was saying. The current intro 'Barrow-in-Furness is a town in northwest of England. Since 1974 it has been part of Cumbria for ceremonial purposes' is also misleading as it's inclusion within Cumbria has more than a ceremonial role. In fact it was the inclusion in Lancaster that was more 'by name' as from the late 19th century while Barrow was included in Lancaster - this was as a county borough with much administrative autonomy. Nogwa 23:13, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
- I, personally, am fine with the intro how it was, say, 24 hours ago. In the Geography section, the following text can be seen.
- The town is geographically and historically part of Lancashire, but has been part of the administrative county of Cumbria since 1974.
- I feel that is a fine sentence, and I suppose that could always be the one in the intro, if needs be. --Dreaded Walrus 23:22, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
- I, personally, am fine with the intro how it was, say, 24 hours ago. In the Geography section, the following text can be seen.
- While they exist, Barrow is in the ceremonial county of Cumbria - not Lancashire as the article was saying. The current intro 'Barrow-in-Furness is a town in northwest of England. Since 1974 it has been part of Cumbria for ceremonial purposes' is also misleading as it's inclusion within Cumbria has more than a ceremonial role. In fact it was the inclusion in Lancaster that was more 'by name' as from the late 19th century while Barrow was included in Lancaster - this was as a county borough with much administrative autonomy. Nogwa 23:13, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
Barrow is and always will be a part of the Duchy of Lancaster. And you can not seperate the Duchy from the historical county paletine. The Department of the Environment accepted that as such in the 1980's. Cumbria is a false county and it may well be disbanded soon anyway.
- I think the history within different counties and as a county borough would be best left to the geography section and doesn't need to be gone into in the introduction. But if it is - the introduction should at least be accurate. To say it is part of the ceremonial county of Lancashire - or that it is part of Cumbria for ceremonial purposes are both misleading. The sentence you quote is fine - except that one of the interesting things about Furness as part of Lancashire is exactly that it was geographically separate from the rest of the county except by crossing the sands! Nogwa 00:00, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- Yes. I also found that fascinating. I am not particularly excellent at putting my point across at time, but what my main thought was, is that the version that the version inserted earlier, that started off this debate, was inaccurate, as "Cumbria" is more than just a ceremonial name. It appears below "Barrow-in-Furness" on all of my mail, for example. --Dreaded Walrus 00:16, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- Cumbria is no longer a postal county and Lancashire is equally acceptable per the Royal Mail. Lancsalot 00:30, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- That is misleading. Cumbria and Lancashire are both former postal counties. Counties no longer form part of any address. Where a county is supplied, it will be ignored. Mrsteviec 11:14, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
On this issue, one of the reasons my own parents and grandparents offered was that since Barrow was part of Cumbria from 1974, most of the adult population were born as Lancastrians and consider the area they were born in as 'traditionally', Lancashire. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 84.67.92.200 (talk • contribs) .
Cleanup
I've just re-read this article, having not done so for several months. It is appalling! The standard of writing is that of a primary school pupil. A great deal of work needs doing to bring this up to encyclopedia level. I've tagged it for cleanup and will make a start on a re-write in due course. Arcturus 22:45, 4 November 2006 (UTC)
Barrow in Furness / Vickers / Vickers Armstrong
I don't think DDH is the largest shipbuilding hall in Europe. It is definately the biggest in UK. The biggest hall in Europe is probably this [[1]]
--84.64.16.16 22:00, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
Some suggestions regarding the Vickers and Barrow in Furness entries.
First, the shipbuilding activities at Barrow were not limited to naval vessels and considerable numbers of passenger liners and cargo ships produced. Notable amongst the customers were P&O (SS Orsova, SS Orcades, Oriana and others. The Biritish Admiral built for BP was, I think, for a very short period the largest ship in the world. With regard to naval vessels HMS Ajax (WW2), HMS Dreadnought (first RN SSN), HMS Princess Royal(Jutland), HMS Hermes (Falklands) and the Japanese Kongo deserve a mention.
Second, the importance of armaments and heavy machinery needs emphasis. Vickers and later Vickers Armstrong constructed artillery for land service and indeed naval service aboard ships built elsewhere. Examples include guns for KGV class battleships and propulsion for HMS Lion.
Third, the merger of Armstrongs and Vickers was very much a result of the collapse in demand for warships as a result of the limitations on naval construction following WW1.
Fourth, the decline in shipbuilding in the 1960's was very much a reflection of the labour difficulties particularly demarkatîon disputes between rival unions and lack of modern practices.
A link to the Barrow museum photgraphic archive would add value.
John Walkley 8th November 2006
- John, there are several articles about the various incarnations of Vickers. One of these is Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd. The material you mention above would certainly improve that article, but I wonder if it should be renamed to something like "Vickers (Barrow)" or "Shipbuilding at Barrow", after all, the yard was only known as VSEL for a short time. What do you think? At the moment I'm re-writing parts of the Barrow article, including the removal of material not directly relevant to the town. However, in the spirit of Wikipedia, why don't you add the material above to whichever article you think appropriate. Increasingly at Wikipedia some editors are expecting discussion prior to editing, and often intimidate people who add or edit material unilaterally. I reject that idea entirely. If you want to add or edit something, just do it. Regards, Arcturus 17:25, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
- Indeed, WP:BE BOLD. A shipbuilding at Barrow-in-Furness article would be a great addition to Wikipedia. Robdurbar 09:32, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
gallery
I have removed the gallery because all the images are not free use, until we can get some free ones it's not worth bothering with it.
Most of these photos seem to be in violation of image policies, I'll leave commented so it can be resurrected one day with free use images.<gallery> Image:Vanguard class image.jpg|''Vanguard''-class of four [[Trident missile|Trident]] ballistic missile submarines Image:HMS Manchester (D95) Type 42 destroyer.jpg|[[HMS Manchester|HMS ''Manchester'']], one of three [[Type 42 destroyers]] built by VSEL Image:HMCS Windsor SSK 877.jpg|[[HMCS Chicoutimi (SSK 879)|HMCS ''Chicoutimi'']], [[Victoria class submarine|''Victoria''-class]] attack submarine Image:HMS Invincible (R05).jpg|[[HMS Invincible (R05)|HMS ''Invincible'']] Image:Oriana_Sydney.jpg|[[SS Oriana (1959)|SS ''Oriana'']] [[Cruise Liner]], seen in [[Sydney]], [[Australia]] Image:Melbourne_Midway.jpg|[[HMAS Melbourne (R21)|HMAS ''Melbourne'']] Image:HMS Sheffield (D80).jpg|[[HMS Sheffield (D80)|HMS ''Sheffield'']] Image:HMS Albion (L14).jpg|[[HMS Albion (L14)|HMS ''Albion'']] </gallery> —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Kijog (talk • contribs) 12:39, 5 May 2007 (UTC).
Cleanup (MkII)
Again the article has descended into a poorly-written entry which features the following (in no particular order):
- A complete absence of references (one example: a contributor went to the effort of including a major employer's URL but could not be bothered to reference the statistic of how many people it employed)
- Poor English
- large amounts of surplus demographic statistics (bizarrely included as the secondmost important thing behind the town's history)
- lists of shops and businesses
- duplicated information (which is often repeated from other more specific articles)
- external websites which are commercial links
- a pointless table about the town's sports clubs
- A bloated trivia section - little if any of which is true (prove me wrong - and then reference it)
If you are going to revert any of the changes I have made - please, please reference them. Otherwise there is little point continuing ignoring the most basic policies of Wikipedia. Askam and Ireleth managed to make Good Article status, why can't its bigger brother? Have a look at it to see how it can be done. I'm a Barrovian myself - I would like nothing more to see Barrow's page as a good article, better still a featured one. At the moment it is simply embarrassing. Kijog 22:45, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
- Ok, count me in. Let's see what we can do with this article... J Milburn 09:59, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
Removed section
I have removed the chronology section, as it is blatantly redundant to the history section. Anything worth keeping can be moved as prose to history, preferably with a reference. The deleted section is below.
Chronology
- 1845 - Barrow began to grow from a small hamlet.
- 1850 - H.W. Schneider discovered large deposits of iron around Barrow, and soon built the towns first blast furnaces.
- 1865 - Many of Barrow's main buildings are constructed (the Town Hall, Main Post Office and Public Library).
- 1867 - Barrow became a municipal borough.
- 1876 - Barrow was home to the largest steelworks in the world.
- 1889 - Barrow became a county borough.
- 1897 - James Ramsden conceived the idea of the Barrow Shipbuilding Company, which later became Vickers.
- 1901 - The Royal Navy's first submarine , Holland 1, was built in Barrow.
- 1914 - The UK had the most advanced submarine fleet in the world, with 94% of it constructed by Vickers.
- 1931 - Barrow's population peaked at around 77,000.
- 1941 - Barrow and its Docks receive extensive damage from German enemy bombing in World War II.
- 1959 - The UK's first nuclear submarine was built in Barrow - the HMS Dreadnought (S101).
- 1974 - The county borough of Barrow-in-Furness and the Dalton-in-Furness urban district formed to make the Borough of Barrow-in-Furness.
- 1985 - Gas found in the Irish Sea begun to be piped to Rampside.
- 2002 - 7 deaths and 172 cases of Legionnaires' disease were revealed to be from a faulty air-conditioning centre in the town's Forum 28.
- 2004 - At least 21 Chinese immigrant cockle pickers die in nearby Morecambe Bay.
- 2006 - Barrow's council was fined £125 000 for violation of health and safety laws that lead to the deaths of seven people in the UK's worst outbreak of Legionnaires' disease. The council also became the UK's first public body to be charged with corporate manslaughter, but was found not guilty.
- 2006 - Barrow RNLI Lifeboats amongst other are deployed to a helicopter crash site in Morecambe Bay with 6 fatalities and 1 missing.
- 2007 - The British House of Commons votes to renew the Trident missile system, which are to be built in Barrow as it is the only British submarine yard.
Leans very much towards recent events, and some is not Barrow specific at all. J Milburn 10:00, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
I think we need an entire section on this, probably at the end of the history section, and perhaps a mention in the lead. I say this because this was international news- I was on holiday at the time, and saw it on CNN. It reached the front page of The Times, and, sad though it is, it is one of the most notable events in the history of Barrow. J Milburn 11:32, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
- weird, I was in Kenya at the time and I couldn't believe it when I saw Barrow flash up on CNN! Agree on this one. Kijog 11:39, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
Additions
I have merged the trivia section into other relevant sections on the article. I hope it has helped and is satisfactory. I have also created other sections that include information about the legionnaires' outbreak, Barrow's modern history, Barrow in popular culture, as well as condensing information to make the contents at the top less confusing. I am also from Barrow, and will do whatever it takes to show how great it is. Shipbuilding wise, take a look at the newest article I have created, it contains information on almost every ship and submarine built in Barrow, whether it has a wikipedia article or not: List of Ships and Submarines Built in Barrow-in-Furness, UK
- That article is fantastic, well done. J Milburn 15:29, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
statistics
We have a hell of a lot of statistics in this article and I question the relevance of most of them. A note, properly referenced, could be made about the ethnicity, place of birth and religion of Barrovians, but I simply don't think we need reams and reams of tables splitting the population up every which way. I know tables can be fiddly to do, so I have left the removed stuff below if we decide to put some stuff back in.Kijog 01:25, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
I have decided to delete the following, there seems to be little appetite to return it to the article. Ki | jog 15:17, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
Notable people list
Can this really be better represented as prose? I think it is best in a list, but a table is possible. I reckon prose just wouldn't be practical to have this as prose- it would be inaccessable, and would just read as it would be- a list converted to prose. Bulking the writing out further would also stretch the section, as there are rather a lot of people there. Anyone have any thoughts? J Milburn 18:24, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- Not sure on this one. Reckon we could make it into prose and put the sports people as a par in the sports section Ki | jog 12:20, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Devonshire dock hall?
Is this the second largest in Europe? The largest in Europe? Anyone have any references? J Milburn 10:33, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- It's not the biggest, that's for sure. I'm pretty sure the Stralsund one is the biggest but it's not the sort of thing that make the Guinness book of records. Prob biggest in Britain - I have access to a cuttings archive so I will see if the Evening Mail has referenced that.Ki | jog 12:22, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Ethnic Minorities
I'm happy for new information to be added to the section, but I think the information is far too detailed to be notable considering the small number of people it concerns. Also, I think the 2001 census results are a stronger source than the 2004 estimates. Some properly referenced content has been deleted to make way for the new breakdown and I'm minded to delete it unless the list can be cleaned up (as per WP:EMBED) and referenced properly. Any thoughts? Ki | jog 12:32, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
More famous people?
I have just come across Category:Barrow A.F.C. players and Category:Barrow A.F.C. managers. It may be worth looking through these for other notable individuals who were born in or who resided in Barrow. I am making a note here because I am currently looking for another reference for Frank McPherson being from Barrow, as the current source is unreliable. J Milburn 16:06, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- Right, well, I am removing Frank McPherson until we can get a good reference for him. It's entirely possible that every reference online can be traced back to whoever added the fact to Wikipedia. There's a fairly good chance there is a book in my house somewhere that will mention him, I will keep my eyes open. J Milburn 16:18, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
History subtitles
I think the subtitles are actually pretty relevant- without them, the history section becomes, in many ways, an inaccessible block of text. I mean, thinking about it from the point of view of a schoolchild researching local history, there is no way they are going to read all of that. However, I see where you are coming from- splitting it up is a little arbitrary, and some similar featured articles I have checked- Weymouth, Sheffield, Birchington-on-Sea- don't have them, BUT, they have much shorter history sections. Perhaps it would look a little better if we split up the text with other things, like pictures- perhaps just moving the middle picture to the left would do the trick. On another note, this isn't looking bad, at all, in comparison to said featured articles. J Milburn 13:59, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
Two possible new sections
Reviewing featured articles on similar topics, two new sections that could be very useful would be geology and climate. For instance, take a look at this very nice table, I'll see what I can do about knocking up something similar. J Milburn 14:07, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
- Ok, table isn't going to be possible, as there is no weather station anywhere near Barrow, according to the met office website. Oh well. J Milburn 14:13, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's disappointing, that's why I had to rip out the original climate stuff because it applied to Blackpool airport! Geology is definitely a goer, as we did in the Askam one. Otherwise, we're getting there, done a bit of a copyedit on History. Two things I've just thought we need to include are a bit about parliamentary politics and also that the Walney to Wear cycle route passes through Barrow. Ki | jog 14:34, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
Weather Station
Walney Airport has a weather station doesn't it? [2] —Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.107.216.120 (talk) 18:09, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
Devonshire Dock Hall
After research I have found out that Devonshire Dock Hall actually is the largest shipbuilding Hall in Europe, and not the German one in Stralsund, Germany. Even the official BAE website states that DDH is the largest. I have therefore reverted all the information relating to the Stralsund Shipyard. The sources stating that DDH is the largest in Europe are: