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Where is his birthplace/date? --Sheynhertz _געשׁ״ך 09:23, 16 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

He was born in Pskov. I have his self biography "the naked spy", and it gives a considerably different view on the Profumo affair. Of course, he is a part in this. VLE 22:43, 3 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Editorial Tone vs. Vernacular

"Keeler's subsequent affair with Profumo went on at a time when she was also sleeping with Ivanov. This was at a time when Cold War tensions were getting hotter as a result of the Cuban Missile Crisis."

I don't mean to be pedantic but a more proper editorial tone needs to be used; the previous lines are entirely too casual. Changed "sleeping" to "being involved" and "getting hotter" to "heightening". *** 2/23/08 by Philosopher2king

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 * He was born in Pskov. I have his self biography "the naked spy", and it gives a considerably different view on the Profumo affair. Of course, he is a part in this.  [[User:Vle|VLE]] 22:43, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
+== Editorial Tone vs. Vernacular ==
+"Keeler's subsequent affair with Profumo went on at a time when ''she was also sleeping'' with Ivanov. This was at a time when Cold ''War tensions were getting hotter'' as a result of the Cuban Missile Crisis."
+I don't mean to be pedantic but a more proper editorial tone needs to be used; the previous lines are entirely too casual. Changed "sleeping" to "being involved" and "getting hotter" to "heightening". *** 2/23/08 by Philosopher2king