Wikipedia:Peer review/Strawberry Fields Forever/archive3

Strawberry Fields Forever

Previous peer review

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.
  

I've listed this article for peer review because I want it promoted to Featured Article.

Thanks, Kodster ^{(heLLo) (Me did that)} 22:16, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Ealdgyth (talk · contribs)

• You said you wanted to know what to work on before taking to FAC, so I looked at the sourcing and referencing with that in mind. I reviewed the article's sources as I would at FAC.
  • What makes the following reliable sources?
    • http://www.icce.rug.nl/~soundscapes/DATABASES/AWP/sff.shtml
      • Written by Alan W. Pollack, a notable musicologist and expert on Beatles.
    • http://oldies.about.com/od/thebeatlessongs/a/strawberryfield.htm (note that about.com isn't usually considered a reliable source)
    • http://www.beatlesbible.com/
      • removed; replaced w/ reliable source
  • current ref 29 (Beatles Bible) is lacking a publisher
    • again, removed

Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 13:18, 6 October 2008 (UTC)