Talk:2008 Abu Kamal raid

Approach

Is it just me, or does the structure, the approach, of this article seem somehow backwards? It offers vague and limited information about the purpose and target of the raid, and that only in the second paragraph, offering nothing at all about the target or purpose in the opening sentences. LordAmeth (talk) 23:26, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

An anon user added the following: It is generally accepted that the US Forces, came, saw, and cleaned up. I think this should be deleted, as it is unhelpful and uncited. --Ye Olde Luke (talk) 23:31, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Is there a way to list all participants involved in the box off to the side? While I am certain that there will be a fact check later, the US is currently claiming that they were looking for an insurgent support network, and I am certain that they would claim not to be the "instigators" as listed. I'm just trying to find a way to express this with an appropriately NPOV. Aderksen (talk) 23:33, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Syrian news???

Is a Syrian news network really verifiable enough to source for an encyclopedia article? The soldiers wouldn't have just killed civilians for no reason, anyone who believes they would is in need of a good ass whuping58.107.179.146 (talk) 23:30, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

See Haditha killings and My Lai Massacre. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 05:59, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, where's the fox news article when you need it? HUR DUR ASS WHOOPIN —Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.84.3.243 (talk) 23:45, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

We need to represent their viewpoints too. The reader is supposed to draw the conclusion; we don't draw it for them. Master of Puppets _{Call me MoP! :)} 23:31, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Though it would be nice to find out how the civilians were killed. Wrong place at the wrong time? --Ye Olde Luke (talk) 23:33, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

It is still unfolding. But according to the Syrian govmt, the only people who were killed are civilians. Intelligence mistake?! hmmm. Yazan (talk) 23:35, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

How likely is the Syrian gov't to admit that the dead were insurgents-to-be ready to cross the border into Iraq? Not likely! A²Kafir (and...?) 23:58, 26 October 2008 (UTC)\

How likely is the US military to admit that they weren't? And four of the dead are children, two were a married couple.76.27.212.74 (talk) 08:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

An eye witness report over at Joshual Landis' blog [1] -- Yazan (talk) 00:01, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

That's why regardless of what we personally think, all casualty counts should have their ref mentioned in the text as well. Joshdboz (talk) 00:02, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Syrian news is a usable source as long as we say "Syrian news service says". ^{(Hypnosadist)} 05:52, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Of course, state Syrian news is a source worth of citing. An usual way would be to write "As reported ...", "As stated by Syrian news channel ..." ellol (talk) 08:11, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Also i do not believe the Syrian news source claims they were killed deliberately, modern assult rifle rounds go a long way and through a lot of walls before stopping. They could just as easily died from a round from an AK-47. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 08:50, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Rifle rounds can indeed travel far and go through walls, but to me that would only explain one or two civilian casualties involving families. A better question is, why would four children, their father, and another married couple be near a construction site? If they were standing on the side watching the construction crew (which sounds reasonable), why would they stay after military helicopters came into view?

I suspect that Syrian news might have embellished the details. Government-controlled news agencies everywhere do that almost as a matter of routine. Especially when that government is openly hostile to one of the parties in the incident. I hope more verifiable facts can come to light that don't originate with the Syrian or American governments. Bouncey (talk) 14:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

No idea on most of that as i was not thier or member of the Syrian press. One point is that on the BBC report i watched half an hour ago they had Syrian state TV showing an injured women who got shot according to her as she ran into open ground durring the firefight to rescue her child. She also stated that the airbourne helicopters fired at the ground. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 14:50, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Map

Considering there's a lack of photos, does anyone think it would be fine to simply put in a Syrian map with Abu Kamal marked on it for the time being? Joshdboz (talk) 00:04, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Sounds good. Chris (クリス • フィッチ) (talk) 00:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

CIA factbook map, anyone? Master of Puppets _{Call me MoP! :)} 00:15, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

There's one right on the Abu Kamal page but I don't know how to put the map point on the generic Syria image. Joshdboz (talk) 00:24, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Done, but its layout is kinda messy. Travisl (talk) 05:24, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Time of attack

According to the info box, the time was 13:45, but the article says 16:45. Which is right? --Ye Olde Luke (talk) 00:26, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

From the BBC [2], 1645 local time and 1345 GMT. Joshdboz (talk) 00:59, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I changed the info box Eiad77 (talk) 02:55, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

neutrality

The article quotes official Syrian versions of the event. The U.S. government position should also be stated. If they don't exists then it should be so stated. Wikipedia cannot be the mouthpiece of Syria nor the United States. Spevw (talk) 02:46, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Absolutely agree. —Cesar Tort 19:56, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

"unauthorized raid"  ??

Presumably this wording in the article means "unauthorized by Syria".

But if that's what it means, the word "unauthorized" seems unnecessary. Clearly Syria does not authorize raids on Syria.

CBHA (talk) 02:50, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Syria could choose to authorise america to attack insurgents in Syria, they are just stating that this did not happen and the USA violated Syrias airspace. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 03:26, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I agree, unauthorized makes it clear that Syria did not consent. Eiad77 (talk) 03:39, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

terrorist attack?

This article is obviously biased. It either should be removed or edited to be neutral. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.33.138.221 (talk) 03:31, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Oh please. Can you imagine what the article would say if Syrian helicopters landed in New York and Special Ops soldiers jumped out and gunned down some children? America's started wars over less. Jetekus (talk) 16:08, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Which ones?Cillmore (talk) 16:25, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Always nice to have an automatic anti-american point of view. Look, Mr. Jetekus. Even if your stand point is that americans eat babies, the idea of a US spec ops team landing to personally shoot women and children is absurd. If the purpose of the attack was to promote terrorism and kill civilians, it would have been far easier, safer, and more effective to just drop a big ole bomb on the place instead. 24.23.207.45 (talk) 22:39, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

October Surprise

Is this really an appropriate link at the bottom of the page?I deleted it pending some discussion in the main body of the article that comments on the media's analysis of the motives attack including influencing the November U.S. elections. TheHammer24 (talk) 03:53, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

No. I was just about to remove when I see that you already did so. Coemgenus 03:56, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Not yet but i'm sure a source will turn up saying just that. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 04:00, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

So, did John McCain just win the election? All Hallow's Wraith (talk) 05:32, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Not unless Syria declares War on the USA for this act of aggression on its teritory. ^{(Hypnosadist)} 05:48, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Types of helicopters

Does anyone know what types of helicopters were involved? Most likely UH-60 Black Hawks which were used in similar operations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mozyr (talk • contribs) 11:46, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Perhaps some expert will identify them from the video, otherwise we'll just have to wait and see if new info comes out. Joshdboz (talk) 14:16, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Possibily MH-60s or MH-47s from the 160th SOAR. Planenut (talk) 15:30, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Concerned about undue weight

I am concerned that this article, as it develops, is starting to give too much space for the official American view on what the raid was about. Nothing that I would change in it yet, but I am concerned because this subject resembles a lot the Operation Orchard, and on that article undue weight for the American/Isreali opinion was, I think, evident.

The problem is, that the Syrian point of view is stated only once, in one paragraph, where as the American view is iterated multiple times. Right now 4 of the 5 paragraphs in this article describe the American view, where as only 1 paragraph is about the Syrian view. I suspect, that as the US releases more information (probably from multiple sources, such as the Army, CIA, officials, etc.) that ratio will start to resemble more like 10 to 1. The problem for us editors is, of course, that there isn't that much to say about the Syrian view, as they have said (and probably will say) much less than the Americans, who will release a lot of information in different variations and from multiple officials. I hope that people will keep this problem in mind when editing the article. Offliner (talk) 11:48, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I agree completely. Although I understand that the need for an article of this scale, it's far to early for something like this. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a "Something happened 4 hours ago and needs to be on Wikipedia right now!" Right now, the article is about 6 paragraphs long, and each reads just like a news report from CNN. This article needs restructured and rewritten, not just more information dumped into it when a new source is found. IMHO, this article in it's current state is NOT worthy of being mentioned on the front page. Mjf3719 (talk) 12:41, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Absolutely the article can be improved. But "In the News" is supposed to be current events, and and a military operation by a superpower that violates sovereign territory is kind of a big deal. Joshdboz (talk) 14:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I am satisfied now that the article has a {Current war|date=October 2008} tag. I know the raid is over, but there is far more to warfare than just helicopters, bullets, and pain. Reports on this incident are still subject to the fog of war. Mjf3719 (talk) 20:05, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

• The summary on the news section of the main page says "United States Special Forces carry out a raid on a foreign fighter logistics network", as if it was a fact, it should be made clear that it is only claimed that it was a "foreign fighter logistics network". FunkMonk (talk) 16:19, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I added a little more balance to the summary section -- Yazan (talk) 16:32, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Hasn't been changed on the main Wikipedia page yet, still says: "United States Special Forces carry out a raid on a foreign fighter logistics network near Abu Kamal, Syria, killing eight. " FunkMonk (talk) 21:54, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Image(s)

Can someone with a grip on uploading images correctly decide whether the picture of troops involved in the raid in this LA Time's blog posting can be used in the article? Not terribly informative, but it is something. Hiberniantears (talk) 16:30, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Syria News has obtained photos of the victims, and the site. Very violent and nasty photos in there though, not for the faint hearted. -- Yazan (talk) 16:45, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

The images aren't free, and they aren't really significant for understanding the article, so they'll probably be deleted if we upload them. FunkMonk (talk) 17:00, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I think the LA photo is just a stock image. Joshdboz (talk) 17:51, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Death count

Were the 8 civilians killed the targets? The infobox lists the death count at 8, and the article refers to the eight as civilians. It also describes the killed Abu Ghadiyain as an Al Qaeda senior coordinator. I understand that Al Qaeda members are technically civilians, but I usually see them distinguished, or at least labeled, as combatants. Louis Waweru  Talk  20:49, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I don't know if there's any consensus. I've seen 8 mentioned, 7 elsewhere, and none mentioning possible al-Qaeda deaths. As for al-Qaeda, this article even suggests that there were multiple kills besides the main leader. Joshdboz (talk) 22:17, 27 October 2008 (UTC)