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I edited this article to update counts on winning streak etc. Also removed description "most boring fight ever televised" which I considered unappropriate. Section 'Mixed Martial Arts' should probably be totally rewritten to better article quality. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Largacthul (talk • contribs) 21:05, 27 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request from Chiasnake, 20 April 2010

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Among his victories are wins over Dan Henderson, Paul Daley, Hayato Sakurai, Dave Menne, Carlos Condit and Yushin Okami. He is currently on a 14-fight winning streak, finishing 8 of his last 9 opponents.

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Among his victories are wins over Dan Henderson, Paul Daley, Hayato Sakurai, Dave Menne, Carlos Condit and Yushin Okami. He is currently on a 14-fight winning streak, finishing 7 of his last 9 opponents.

Shields did not finish his last two fights, he won via unanimous decision against both Dan Henderson and Jason Miller, therefore 7 of his last 9 fights have been finished.

Chiasnake (talk) 16:02, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. -- /MWOAP|Notify Me\ 21:35, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Is wikipedia not a reliable enough source for you? His MMA record on his wiki page clearly shows he has finished 7 of his last 9 opponents and not 8 of 9. If you need a source for this edit to be done then his mma record shouldn't be on his page by your definition. (98.222.182.133 (talk) 03:19, 6 May 2010 (UTC))[reply]

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+:: Is wikipedia not a reliable enough source for you?  His MMA record on his wiki page clearly shows he has finished 7 of his last 9 opponents and not 8 of 9.  If you need a source for this edit to be done then his mma record shouldn't be on his page by your definition. ([[Special:Contributions/98.222.182.133|98.222.182.133]] ([[User talk:98.222.182.133|talk]]) 03:19, 6 May 2010 (UTC))