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The phrase "immigrated to the United States" is inappropriate

The phrase "immigrated to the United States" is inappropriate. It has a geographical bias which reveals a bias on the part of the author. I would respectfully suggest to the author that the word "immigrated" be replaced with the word "moved".

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+== The phrase "immigrated to the United States" is inappropriate ==
+The phrase "immigrated to the United States" is inappropriate.  It has a geographical bias which reveals a bias on the part of the author.  I would respectfully suggest to the author that the word "immigrated" be replaced with the word "moved".