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I questioned the capitalization of "assigned."
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::I have reviewed the section in question, and reduced the content to an appropriate passage. I see that in the interim, [[User:Cuchullain|Cuchullain]] has jumped in and explained why these revisions were made. An article devoted to the Cristian Fernandez case would be the place for all the detail previously included here, but as is policy on Wikipedia, it must have a neutral point of view. [[User:Mgreason|<span style="color:purple">Mgrē@sŏn</span>]] 14:16, 2 February 2012 (UTC)
::I have reviewed the section in question, and reduced the content to an appropriate passage. I see that in the interim, [[User:Cuchullain|Cuchullain]] has jumped in and explained why these revisions were made. An article devoted to the Cristian Fernandez case would be the place for all the detail previously included here, but as is policy on Wikipedia, it must have a neutral point of view. [[User:Mgreason|<span style="color:purple">Mgrē@sŏn</span>]] 14:16, 2 February 2012 (UTC)


== A point of spelling == should "assigned" be capitalized here?
== A point of spelling ==
Should "assigned" be capitalized here?
I'd guess not, but it could be part of Ms Corey's title:
I'd guess not, but it could be part of Ms Corey's title:


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NPOV

Requested explanation of reasons for NPOV tag from User:VinnyVideo. Mgrē@sŏn 17:10, 9 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

User who added NPOV tag did not respond, so I am removing it. I left a note on his page if and when he cares to discuss this. Mgrē@sŏn 00:41, 15 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Edit war

There seems to be an edit war over the Cristian Fernandez case. I will review the text from a NPOV and adjust, if necessary. If the unregistered user Angelabcorey IS Angela Corey, it is inappropriate for her to edit this article, due to conflict of interest. Please request that an administrator review your concerns in situations such as this. Mgrē@sŏn 13:18, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I took a look, and the material is quite clearly problematic. Dedicating half or more of the article to one incident is an obvious violation of WP:UNDUE, while the level of detail about a news story clearly violates WP:NOTNEWS. Beyond just that, a lot of the wording is not neutral, a very huge problem in a biography of a living person. Finally, some of the sources are a problem. For instance, two are links to online petitions - these aren't sources, they're link spam.
Mgreason, we've run into this issue before with articles on local Jacksonville figures. Corey's involvement in the Cristian Fernandez case is probably appropriate, but it needs to be neutral and greatly reduced. I'll take a stab at it in a bit, but as it stood the material is not appropriate for a Wikipedia article involving living people.--Cúchullain t/c 13:46, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I have reviewed the section in question, and reduced the content to an appropriate passage. I see that in the interim, Cuchullain has jumped in and explained why these revisions were made. An article devoted to the Cristian Fernandez case would be the place for all the detail previously included here, but as is policy on Wikipedia, it must have a neutral point of view. Mgrē@sŏn 14:16, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A point of spelling

Should "assigned" be capitalized here? I'd guess not, but it could be part of Ms Corey's title:

"Governor Rick Scott announced that she would be the newly Assigned State Attorney investigating..." 151.204.190.111 (talk) 13:13, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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