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SchuminWeb (talk | contribs) m SchuminWeb moved page Talk:Cold brew coffee to Talk:Cold brew: Actually, going further, the article refers to it first as "Cold brew" without "coffee". |
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# The second reference is broken because the site was 'upgraded' without 'rerouting' to new page location. |
# The second reference is broken because the site was 'upgraded' without 'rerouting' to new page location. |
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--[[User:Mhd196|Mhd196]] ([[User talk:Mhd196|talk]]) 19:06, 10 June 2012 (UTC) |
--[[User:Mhd196|Mhd196]] ([[User talk:Mhd196|talk]]) 19:06, 10 June 2012 (UTC) |
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While agreeing with the previous, I have a further two comments:<br /> |
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# In the 3rd sentence of the first paragraph, "Beans should be ground coarse..." is not grammatical English. an option is Beans should be coarsely ground", for example |
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# Similar information is repeated in the first sentence of the second paragraph. |
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[[Special:Contributions/122.106.177.130|122.106.177.130]] ([[User talk:122.106.177.130|talk]]) 00:41, 27 October 2012 (UTC) |
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I have two comments on this article:
- It should be part of an article about brewing coffee (for example), section methods of brewing.
- The second reference is broken because the site was 'upgraded' without 'rerouting' to new page location.
--Mhd196 (talk) 19:06, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
While agreeing with the previous, I have a further two comments:
- In the 3rd sentence of the first paragraph, "Beans should be ground coarse..." is not grammatical English. an option is Beans should be coarsely ground", for example
- Similar information is repeated in the first sentence of the second paragraph.
122.106.177.130 (talk) 00:41, 27 October 2012 (UTC)