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:*<!--Make first comment here-->[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Excellent well-cited article; length, date OK; hook confirmed by online reference. But I think we should specify ''which'' war, and maybe clarify the hook. How about: |
:*<!--Make first comment here-->[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Excellent well-cited article; length, date OK; hook confirmed by online reference. But I think we should specify ''which'' war, and maybe clarify the hook. How about: |
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*'''ALT1''' ... that British architect '''[[H. T. Cadbury-Brown]]''' served with the [[Royal Artillery]] in the Second World War but made it all the way from [[Normandy]] to Germany without firing a shot? |
*'''ALT1''' ... that British architect '''[[H. T. Cadbury-Brown]]''' served with the [[Royal Artillery]] in the Second World War but made it all the way from [[Normandy]] to Germany without firing a shot? |
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::I agree with your suggestion, the shortened "war" kind of works within the context of the article (although I will now change it) but it is unclear which war it refers to when used with the DYK. Are you able to make the amendment to the DYK or do I do it? Thanks. [[User:Kenchikuben|Kenchikuben]] ([[User talk:Kenchikuben|talk]]) 16:06, 15 November 2012 (UTC) |
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H. T. Cadbury-Brown
- ... that British architect H. T. Cadbury-Brown served with the Royal Artillery in the war but did not fire a shot from Normandy to Germany?
Created/expanded by Kenchikuben (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Excellent well-cited article; length, date OK; hook confirmed by online reference. But I think we should specify which war, and maybe clarify the hook. How about:
- ALT1 ... that British architect H. T. Cadbury-Brown served with the Royal Artillery in the Second World War but made it all the way from Normandy to Germany without firing a shot?
- I agree with your suggestion, the shortened "war" kind of works within the context of the article (although I will now change it) but it is unclear which war it refers to when used with the DYK. Are you able to make the amendment to the DYK or do I do it? Thanks. Kenchikuben (talk) 16:06, 15 November 2012 (UTC)