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Humphrey Kynaston

I have rephrased the second sentence under "Attractions" - which initially read as "Consequently his actions have made way for many attractions in the local area", implying he created all the present day attractions - to "Consequently his legendary deeds have become the basis for many attractions in the local area", for better English and to acknowledge the legendary nature of what is known about much of his life.Cloptonson (talk) 20:35, 22 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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 ==Humphrey Kynaston==
 I have rephrased the second sentence under "Attractions" - which initially read as "Consequently his actions have made way for many attractions in the local area", implying he created all the present day attractions - to "Consequently his legendary deeds have become the basis for many attractions in the local area", for better English and to acknowledge the legendary nature of what is known about much of his life.[[User:Cloptonson|Cloptonson]] ([[User talk:Cloptonson|talk]]) 20:35, 22 January 2013 (UTC)