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I wrote most of the article on Graham Townsend and provided a host of references, so I don't understand the comments at the top:

This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. (December 2012) This article contains wording that promotes the subject in a subjective manner without imparting real information. (December 2012)

especially the second, as it's full of "real information".