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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to take it to FL status. [[User:Yashthepunisher|Yashthepunisher]] ([[User talk:Yashthepunisher|talk]])'' 5:38, 1 June 2015 (UTC) |
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to take it to FL status. [[User:Yashthepunisher|Yashthepunisher]] ([[User talk:Yashthepunisher|talk]])'' 5:38, 1 June 2015 (UTC) |
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to take it to FL status. Yashthepunisher (talk) 5:38, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
I will comments in a few days, but before that please withdraw the FLC as it is not valid to have WP:PR and WP:FLC open at the same time. --FrankBoy CHITCHAT 10:37, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
- Comments from FrB.TG
- I find WP:POV issue here as I find every film mentioned as "critically acclaimed" OR is it that all of his films were praised?
- He does not have so many acting (major role) credits in his pocket so why mention so many?
- "occasional actor" is a little bit weird or I should say... urgh!
- "known for his work in Hindi cinema" - Replace "Hindi cinema" with "Bollywood" as we always use this term.
- "He later wrote and directed a short tele-film, Last Train to Mahakali (1999)" - Television film sounds much better.
- "His next venture was Black Friday (2007), a film about the 1993 Mumbai bombings" - "1993 Bombay bombings".
- Ref no. 7 does not say that the film Black Friday opened to "widespread critical appreciation".
- "In 2009, he came up with Dev.D" - What do you mean by "came up"?
- "His first release
ofin 2010 was the anthology film Mumbai Cutting" - Can you swipe the places of "Year" and "Title" in the table as every "FL" filmography uses this format.
- Are you sure that Yudh comes under the "Feature films" category?
- Tables do not meet WP:ACCESS for row and col scopes (see MOS:DTT).
- Can you mention the upcoming films' stages that they have reached.
- Centering the refs. make them look better.
- Awards (in the table) should be restricted to the National Film Awards and Filmfare as in filmography we have the most notable ones.
- Link the publisher of the reference on its first instance.
- YouTube source is not acceptable especially if it is by an unknown user (I mean not by an official channel). BTW a YouTube source only acceptable when there is no other reliable source available. -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 21:05, 2 June 2015 (UTC)