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05:30:31, 5 November 2015 review of submission by Mtuck82

• Mtuck82 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:UBET (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi Flat Out. I've created a few different Wikipedia pages under various monikers over the years. I see the Sick Of It All page is still going strong! I'm just wondering why the UBET page is deemed not notable enough for inclusion? I note that Tatts Group has a page, but UBET currently does not. However, to borrow from a similar example, both Flight Centre and Flight Centre Australia have separate Wikipedia pages. Are you able to explain to me what the difference between Tatts Group/UBET and Flight Centre/Flight Centre Australia might be? I'm keen to stay within the bounds of Wiki protocol.

Hi Mtuck82, there is simply a lack of coverage about UBET in its own right so it doesn't pass WP:CORP or WP:GNG in my opinion. Flat Out (talk) 02:07, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

HELP

Hi You've declined my entry because it doesn't provide enough citations. I have tried to back up every paragraph. I'd be grateful for your advice on where I'm going wrong, Thanks Lee — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amanwy (talk • contribs) 15:51, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

Amanwy you seem to have added citations after I declined the draft. Flat Out (talk) 01:29, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

AfC

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Manoj Hagalavadi. thanks for your message. If you look at WP:REFBEGIN it will show you how to reference your article. Better referencing will help get the article approved. Best wishes Flat Out (talk) 03:57, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

Thank you,I will try it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Manoj Hagalavadi. (talk • contribs) 04:02, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

Uchida handbells edit

Problems: Tone was too informal. Avoid peacock words. Is the problem the second sentence "The manufacturing giant..."? Should I just reword it to "The megacorporation..." or something like that? Ecotopian7 (talk) 05:23, 12 November 2015 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Genesis P-Orridge

The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Genesis P-Orridge. Legobot (talk) 00:01, 15 November 2015 (UTC)

07:21:14, 17 November 2015 review of submission by Gretchenlewis

• Gretchenlewis (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Delsinki Records (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi there I was trying to create a page for Delsinki Records and I have not written the article correctly could you please let me know what sort of changes I should look at making to it so it doesn't seem like an ad? Thanks for your time :)

Hi Flat Out, Your request for more and better citations for my entry on Philip Trager—https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Philip_Trager—had to wait a bit as Trager had to help me track down the additional references, and he was on press in Germany until just this week. Sorry! In any case, he helped me find the missing cites, and I've deleted a fair amount of copy that could not be cited specifically. The article still gets across what it needs to, however, and I triple-checked all the cites for accuracy. I hope that will push it "over the top" and we can finally get approval. Please get back to me with any further issues you may find, and I'll address them, too, and this time (I hope) more quickly. Thanks for your help. PeterPBGD (talk) 21:14, 17 November 2015 (UTC)PeterPBGD