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House on the water

A few suggestions:

Please use an encyclopedic wp:tone. Avoid this kind of prose: Its themes and atmosphere are similar to his prior movie Smell of Camphor, Scent of Jasmine, however with no repeat. It enjoys entirely other atmosphere and form. Both relate to death, but each otherwise. I removed it.
Please use Help:Footnotes. These begin with <ref> contain the citation and end with </ref> There are wp:templates which can help you format a footnote. {{cite web}}, {{cite book}}, {{cite news}}, and {{cite journal}} (for magazines)

Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 08:59, 27 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

House on the water

Should the title have title caps: House on the Water?

This link is dead: http://www.reel.com/reel.asp?node=features/interviews/farmanara

Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 09:06, 27 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Jim1138 Thanks. Yes I believe you are right, it should be in capital letter, like The Silence of the Lambs. I think it also has to have an "A" at its beginning, i.e.: "A House on the Water". I would appreciate your help in changing its title, as I do not know how to change the article names in Wikipedia. Thanks in advance, A.R. Mamduhi (talk) 09:25, 27 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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 Cheers [[User:Jim1138|Jim1138]] ([[User talk:Jim1138|talk]]) 09:06, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
+@Jim1138
+Thanks. Yes I believe you are right, it should be in capital letter, like The Silence of the Lambs. I think it also has to have an "A" at its beginning, i.e.: "A House on the Water". I would appreciate your help in changing its title, as I do not know how to change the article names in Wikipedia.
+Thanks in advance,
+[[User:A.R. Mamduhi|A.R. Mamduhi]] ([[User talk:A.R. Mamduhi#top|talk]]) 09:25, 27 December 2015 (UTC)