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The warnings were put up without any reasonable explanation. I don't quite understand how this article is written like an advertisement. How does it read like an advertisement? What isn't neutral about the article? Let me know what you see and I will change it.

Denver Paramedics is a nonprofit public service, just like a police or fire department. Everything in this article are sourced facts. There is no original research. The sources are reliable.Dbkilo (talk)

I don't think that {{ad}} was warranted. It looks like a pretty straightforward description of the organization to me.

The notability issue, however, still needs to be addressed. To do that, you need to find at least one non-local reliable source that discusses the organization (or some aspect of it). This means, for example, that you've could use a newspaper article that isn't by The Denver Post (or any other newspaper published in Denver) that discusses the organization. WhatamIdoing (talk) 04:49, 21 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, I added references from Jems.com and healthinforum.ore and public safety.com If you need any more references let me know. and I'll find some more.Dbkilo (talk)

You're welcome. I've made a few minor changes, and pulled the notability tag.

Have you thought about including full bibliographic citations for your sources? Right now, if one of these websites rearranges its pages, the refs will be pretty much lost. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:21, 22 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'd love to, but I can't seem to figure out what you mean by bibliographic citations or how to do it. Any direction would be greatly appreciated. Thank youDbkilo (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 03:43, 22 February 2010 (UTC).[reply]

I apologize for the year-late reply: Just type up what you would for a paper you wrote at school. So for the first one, you would type something like this:

"Blood on Tap: Part 1: History in the Making" 01 February 2004. EMS World.

There are simplified directions at WP:REFB and lots of details at WP:CITE, but just typing up the author, date, title, and publication is usually good enough. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:21, 27 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Source links

As best I can tell, every single reference link either goes to a 404 page or the domain isn't even valid. Links just need to be updated.

Janus303 (talk) 08:30, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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 ::::::[http://www.emsworld.com/article/article.jsp?id=2340&siteSection=19 "Blood on Tap: Part 1: History in the Making"]  01 February 2004.  ''EMS World''.
 :::::There are simplified directions at [[WP:REFB]] and lots of details at [[WP:CITE]], but just typing up the author, date, title, and publication is usually good enough.  [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 23:21, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
+== Source links ==
+As best I can tell, every single reference link either goes to a 404 page or the domain isn't even valid. Links just need to be updated.
+ [[User:Janus303|Janus303]] ([[User talk:Janus303|talk]]) 08:30, 29 April 2016 (UTC)