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{{Translated page|fr|Hôtel-Dieu de Paris}}
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Now working on referencing and improving the article. [[User:AlexandrDmitri|-- Александр Дмитрий (Alexandr Dmitri)]] ([[User talk:AlexandrDmitri|talk]]) 09:51, 20 September 2009 (UTC)
Now working on referencing and improving the article. [[User:AlexandrDmitri|-- Александр Дмитрий (Alexandr Dmitri)]] ([[User talk:AlexandrDmitri|talk]]) 09:51, 20 September 2009 (UTC)

== Feedback on article ==

Hello. This article has a strong lead section, which is great because it will draw people's interest. Just a couple of suggestions you might want to consider:
1) Reorganize the 3rd paragraph of history section. The information about the financial crisis is a little confusing because it does not explicitly state now the various measures taken and/or interventions fixed the crisis.
2) A little more information on why the hospital could not compete with medical advancements
3) A couple of modern day Parisian healthcare systems to enhance and contextualise "Role within the Parisian healthcare system" section.

I look forward to discussing the suggestion further if required!

Revision as of 04:44, 17 March 2017

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aeisenstadt1, Juan.Villabona001, Zerimare10 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Dghosh5.


Closing of emergency services?

When I was in Paris on the 13th of february, there where banners on the outside of the building protesting the closing of the emergency services of the Hospital. I expected to find a paragraf about it on wikipedia, but there was nothing. I have pictures of the banners that I can upload if someone can write about it. mskogly 11:17, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Untitled

Is this a stub about a French Building or is it a stub about an institutionalized French medical organization. I've never heard of a building being "founded." I've never heard of a building supporting charities. I've never heard of a building having expertise in any field of medicine, as the article implies. Xientist 00:52, 7 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for pointing this matter out. The use of the term "it" was used in a rather confusing matter. I have made some clarifications to the content, hopefully, it makes more sense now. Folajimi 00:57, 7 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Misappropriated Content

The body of this page is simply a translation of the history page on the official site. This seems to me to be inappropriate. An Editor should look into this from an ethical point of view.

cf. http://www.hotel-hospitel.com/historique.htm —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 66.27.121.93 (talk) 06:02, 21 March 2007 (UTC).[reply]

Translation from fr-Wikipedia

Now working on referencing and improving the article. -- Александр Дмитрий (Alexandr Dmitri) (talk) 09:51, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on article

Hello. This article has a strong lead section, which is great because it will draw people's interest. Just a couple of suggestions you might want to consider: 1) Reorganize the 3rd paragraph of history section. The information about the financial crisis is a little confusing because it does not explicitly state now the various measures taken and/or interventions fixed the crisis. 2) A little more information on why the hospital could not compete with medical advancements 3) A couple of modern day Parisian healthcare systems to enhance and contextualise "Role within the Parisian healthcare system" section.

I look forward to discussing the suggestion further if required!