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I've listed this article for peer review because… I wanted to see what I'm missing before I submit this for GAN. Thanks, Blue Pumpkin Pie (talk) 17:31, 12 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Passing comment: the gameplay section needs more sources. JOE BRO 64 00:41, 14 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The review scores should be pulled out of prose and placed into a review table. See Template:Video game reviews for help on putting it together. I'd recommend creating a multi-platform table. TarkusAB^talk 12:28, 30 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Many references could be improved citing authors too. Kelesis (talk) 22:05, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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 * Passing comment: the gameplay section needs more sources. [[User:TheJoebro64|<small style="color:red">JOE</small>]][[User talk:TheJoebro64|<small>BRO</small>]][[Special:Contributions/TheJoebro64|<span style="color:#D18719">64</span>]] 00:41, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * The review scores should be pulled out of prose and placed into a review table. See [[Template:Video game reviews]] for help on putting it together. I'd recommend creating a multi-platform table. [[User:TarkusAB|<span style="color: #000000">'''TarkusAB'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:TarkusAB|<span style="color: #aa0000">'''talk'''</span>]]</sup> 12:28, 30 June 2018 (UTC)
+* Many references could be improved citing authors too. [[User:Kelesis|Kelesis]] ([[User talk:Kelesis|talk]]) 22:05, 18 August 2018 (UTC)