User talk:Sulfurboy

Please do the following when posting on my page(I will ignore your comment if you don't follow these simple rules):

1) Post new sections at the bottom of the page.

2) PLEASE LINK TO YOUR ARTICLE, I go through a myriad of pages a day, I won't know what you're talking about unless you link your article.

3) Please don't request me to re-review your article unless I've specifically asked you to do so. AfC is incredibly backlogged and someone will get to it when they can.

I welcome anyone to comment or reply to others on my page, but please be kind and if their post breaks one of the above three rules, please ignore them as well.

Draft for "Joseph Bae"

Thank you for your feedback on my first attempt at a Wikipedia article Draft:Joseph Bae. I am writing for more targeted advice on my references. I am writing about a finance executive who is referenced by name in three different Wikipedia articles (articles for KKR, Exor, Janice Y. K. Lee all reference Bae) and who is a public figure via his philanthropy (he might be worth listing under notable Harvard alums). In my research, I drew from the following sources: Wall Street Journal, Reuters, New York Times, Forbes, and Bloomberg, as well as the KKR website for basic biographical information. All these sources discussed Bae by name and in depth.

Should I look for more references? Or make better use of the ones I have? Or are these major news organizations not neutral enough?

Thank you in advance for your help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brick the golden (talk • contribs) 17:05, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Brick the golden, None of those sources show coverage of the subject that is either in depth or apart from being WP:ROUTINE except maybe the wedding vows article and that's not going to be enough. Sulfurboy (talk) 22:35, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

@Sulfurboy: I included several articles from widely distributed publications that I don't think can be considered routine coverage. Specifically, Reuters' "Exclusive: KKR Asia business architect Bae to return to U.S." and "KKR names Bae, Nuttall as co-presidents in step toward succession"; Private Equity International's "Bae's Rise to the Top of KKR"; Harvest's "Teamwork at the Top: In Conversation With KKR’s Joseph Bae and Scott Nuttall". While not in the headline, he's discussed quite a bit in the NYT article "K.K.R. Lays Out a Line of Succession, a Rare Move in Private Equity". I'm not trying to be obstinate, I just think it's clear that he's been covered in the media repeatedly, more so than many other business people who do have Wikipedia pages. Are the articles I reference above really routine coverage, akin to sports or wedding announcements? And does the subject not clear the bar of notability, "A person is presumed to be notable if he or she has received significant coverage in reliable secondary sources that are independent of the subject."?

The Reuters and NYT article is WP:ROUTINE corporate coverage. The PEI article is unreliable as there is no confirmed author nor editorial oversight and in all likelihood black hat SEO. The Harvest source is a primary interview which does not denote notability. This page doesn't come close to denoting notability. Sulfurboy (talk) 13:39, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft page "André Freire"

Dear Sulfurboy,

Thank you very much for your revision on the page I'm working on (see it here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Andr%C3%A9_Freire). However, I'd like to make a request, if you could oblige me.

In order to be published, it says on it that I should: 1 - Use the quotations as footnotes; 2 - Use a formal tone and a neutral point of view.

Could you point me, more specifically, what may be wrong, within the text, when it comes to the neutral point of view? The information I put there is completely factual (I'm using the author's institutional CV, at his university). Also, I tried to put the references whenever I thought necessary. Maybe I should use more of them?

Thank you very much!

Best,

KaiserViriatus (Viriato Queiroga) KaiserViriatus (talk) 01:56, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

KaiserViriatus, Wikipedia is not a directory or place to post someones CV and work history. First you need to review WP:MOS for how to properly format an article. I would then heavily condense all of the publications to those most relevant, something like his five to 10 most cited works. Also, all of the external links need to be removed from the body of the article and integrated as references and inline citations if applicable. This article is a LONG way from getting accepted. Sulfurboy (talk) 04:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Dear Sulfurboy,

Thank you for your reply and useful explanations! In all fairness, I'm not using Wikipedia as a directory to post André Freire's CV. But seeing as I'm quite inexperienced, I asked you to get an idea of what should be done. Thus, once again, thank you! As to your indications: I'm already working on the article, while taking into consideration the formatting of a given article. Best, KaiserViriatus (talk) 16:48, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Dear Sulfurboy, I'd like to let you know that I've finished editing the Draft article, trying to meet your indications and Wikipedia's rules (I hope I was able to not make mistakes or not use Wikipedia's rules). If you want to review it again, I'd be pleased. If not, I want to thank you, anyway, for your previous help :) Best, and hoping you're in good health, KaiserViriatus (talk) 18:06, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Question regarding my draft that is waiting review

Hello! I have been creating a few articles now since you reviewed mine so I don't really use the draft-way of writing articles that much anymore. I was though uncertain if the topic I was writing about existed already in the main space, so I decided to make a draft instead, you can find it here. Wanted to write to you directly since I am very sure that it will go through, but just wanted an administrator's clarification that there wasn't an article already for the band in question. Would you like to look at it? I'm sorry if it isn't okay to ask about looking at the draft but as I've mentioned, I'm pretty sure that the article will go through. Have a nice day! Zandor (talk) 13:01, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Splashgear Update

Hi there, I hope you're doing well. I wanted to let you know that I found the original links to the news publications so that the article is showing reliable sources now.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Splashgear

JamesLeary (talk) 20:28, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft: Abdirahman Abdishakur Warsame

Hello Sulfurboy

may you please check this article again and submit it?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Abdirahman_Abdishakur_Warsame

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by AhmedKadiye (talk • contribs) 21:16, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Could you help me?

I need help with my article Draft:DeviantHorror (hip hop duo) — Preceding unsigned comment added by ShaneCoats (talk • contribs) 23:53, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Reliable source question for David Hanna (artist) page

Hi Sulfurboy,

Thanks so much for the initial feedback on this page for the artist David Hanna: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:David_Hanna_(artist)

I'm been helping the page creator improve the sources, but we're worried by the possibility of submitting it again, getting rejected, and potentially having the page deleted as a result. Two quotes in the draft were pulled from museum exhibition catalogues, which I've seen in PDF form but I've been unable to locate online. If I rely on the catalogues to confirm the two quotes, but I can't actually link to the catalogues in the article, do we risk getting rejected again? If that's the case, I'll make more changes before resubmitting. Thanks for any additional feedback and for your patience with this request.

Merriermerry (talk) 00:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Merriermerry, You're fine to resubmit. I haven't reviewed it again, but I wouldn't worry about rejection as long as your making good faith efforts to improve the article. Sulfurboy (talk) 08:18, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you — good to know! Resubmitting now. Merriermerry (talk) 23:38, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Questions to create articles directly

Hi, My question is that as per Wikipedia rules, I have also edited articles more than 10 times. And my account is also four days old. And there are two articles made by me. But I have not yet received permission to create a direct article. Why so? While it is written on Help:Your first article page that you can create direct articles by completing these rules. Please explain in detail. Mr Tejal (talk) 10:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Mr Tejal, I don't know and I'm probably the wrong person to ask. I would ask at WP:TEA Sulfurboy (talk) 11:05, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 11:06:43, 7 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Earthianyogi

• Earthianyogi (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Copula in signal processing (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Copula article declined

Hello, My article was declined by a senior editor :@Sulfurboy:. The comments provided were "What is going to be most helpful here is providing a lead that introduces the subject to the uninitiated reader. That is, imagine you are trying to explain this concept as simply as possible to someone that doesn't know about this subject, how would you do so? Once that is done we can properly assess the notability of the subject." This comment makes perfect sense, however, the concept is already define in another article on Wikipedia at URL https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copula_(probability_theory). Does it mean that I am suppose to duplicate the same information in my article? Or it it more appropriate to merge two articles? Also, I would be thankful if a senior editor could help write this up so that it is accepted? Thanks for the feedback. Earthianyogi (talk) 11:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Earthianyogi, Responded at helpe desk. Sulfurboy (talk) 11:12, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Earthianyogi (talk) 11:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Nikolai_Udianskyi

Thank you for reviewing of Draft:Nikolai_Udianskyi and for you remarks.

Please check and let me know if my improvements to the article are satisfactory. --Perohanych (talk) 12:41, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

@Sulfurboy: --Perohanych (talk) 08:44, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Skyline Communications article (draft)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sophie_Merchouk/sandbox

Hi @Sulfurboy:,

If I understand the comments correctly, the draft I submitted was rejected because of the lack of references and quality of those included, right? If I simply add more (& third-party) references, would it then be accepted? I also read the comment you wrote on my Talk page, but I believe I have done exactly as you suggest there:

, that's mentioned on my user page. I did disclose the fact that I am working as a copywriter for Skyline Communications, so I don't really see what the problem is there.

Please advise as to what I can do to resubmit the draft and for it to be accepted (I have not & will not edit anything in the meantime, as you requested).

You need to properly disclose on the draft itself, not on my talk page. The reasons for the decline were provided in the decline message along with links to applicable policies. Beyond that, I have no interest in volunteering my time to help you get paid for yours.Sulfurboy (talk) 13:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vicky_Chandhok

I have added details and trying to put for review have published by mistake. Can you please check and revert it to drafts. thanks, david 7 April 2020 (Davidindia (talk) 13:48, 7 April 2020 (UTC))

Davidindia, It is still in draftspace and is currently submitted, you didn't do anything wrong. Sulfurboy (talk) 14:36, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Nomination of 2019 Addison King Air 350 crash for deletion

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article 2019 Addison King Air 350 crash is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/2019 Addison King Air 350 crash until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. ...William, is the complaint department really on the roof? 15:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Regarding my article its been rejected

My Article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fh.india/sandbox#Priyanka_Arora_Actress_Aricle

has been rejected and can I know the reason and also help me hope can I improve it please .. if there anything which needs to be removed let me know i will delete it.. since iam new here iam bit confused kindly help — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fh.india (talk • contribs) 15:41, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 16:08:15, 7 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Earthianyogi

• Earthianyogi (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Copula in signal processing (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I added: "A copula is a mathematical function that provides a relationship between marginal distributions of random variables and their joint distributions. Copula is important because it represents a dependence structure without using marginal distributions. Copula has been widely used in the field of finance, but its use in signal processing is relatively new. Copula has been employed in the field of wireless communication for classifying radar signals, change detection in remote sensing applications, and EEG signal processing in medicine." However, I was unable to remove the title 'Copula signal processing' as suggested by the another editor Maury Markowitz; maybe someone could help. thanks again.Earthianyogi (talk) 16:08, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Earthianyogi (talk) 16:08, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Earthianyogi, I'm confused by what you mean with remove the title....do you mean move the page to "Copula signal processing"? Sulfurboy (talk) 16:25, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Sulfurboy, I was suggested that "The lead is a bigger issue. To start with, the article does have something like a lead already - simply remove the header "Copula in Signal Processing" and that paragraph becomes a typical lead for a math article." However, I was unable to remove/change this title. Thank you

I'm not sure what that person was trying to suggest. I would reach out to them for clarification. Sulfurboy (talk) 17:09, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Sulfurboy, they were suggesting to change the title. But I can do that later if the article gets accepted or maybe it would not be required. Thanks Earthianyogi (talk) 17:11, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 16:22:35, 7 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Alviani

• Alviani (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Elisabetta Fabrizi (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi thank you for reviewing the draft I wrote. It has been rejected because sources are not verifiable. I’m trying to understand why this is as I ve used sources such as main newspapers and main art magazines in the field such as the guardian, the independent, frieze, art monthly and two publications published by Yale university press and by the British film institute. I’m really willing to understand, also for future article writing. I’d really appreciate your help in improving this article and future ones. Thank you for your help --Alviani (talk) 16:22, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Alviani (talk) 16:22, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 16:33:21, 7 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Alviani

• Alviani (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Elisabetta Fabrizi (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Help with understanding why sources are not considered verifiable

Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Elisabetta_Fabrizi Thank you reviewing the article. It has been rejected and I’m trying to understand why. I have included notes for most of the information. The sources of the notes are main newspaper criticism such as from the guardian, the New York Times, the independent, and main art magazines such as frieze and art monthly plus I cited two books published by major publishers such as Yale university press and the british film institute. I would really appreciate your help in understanding how to improve the article before I make edits and resubmit. I appreciate you review many articles so thank you for your time. --Alviani (talk) 16:33, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Alviani (talk) 16:33, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Alviani, Vimeo and IMDB are generally considered unreliable. Also, some of the sources are not correctly formatted. Please see WP:REFB Sulfurboy (talk) 16:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft Article Review - Verifiable References

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Thatrom_Thookrom

Above page got declined stating that I have not given verifiable references. I have given all the verifiable reference available in the public domain like Newspapers, Local Language Magazine etc. I checked with other movie pages and all of them has similar references only. Any unreleased movie page can have only these kind of references from. Please advise. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikied20 (talk • contribs) 18:51, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Wikied20, Social media, youtube and imdb are generally considered unreliable and thus shouldn't be used. If you can't find other, more reliable sources to back the information in the article then that info should be removed. Sulfurboy (talk) 19:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Article to be deleted

Hello Sulfurboy,

Just recently, my 1st article submission (The Toast Office) to Wikipedia was declined due to unintentional phrasing that suggested advertising properties. Thus, I was notified but would like to make sure that it was in fact then accordingly deleted and that there is nothing else I need to do in this process. Thank you for all your assistance and I apologize for any misunderstanding, error or inconvenience this may have caused! I hope to contribute more suitable content for Wikipedia in the future!

Best,

AforAnne 4:47pm 4/7/20

References Question - Cap Gold (Musical Artist)

Hi Sulfurboy,

Hope this message finds you well.

Thank you for taking the time to review my submission for the musical artist, Cap Gold (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Cap_Gold). I'm curious why the references haven't been deemed credible; I used all independent sources I found online from reputable sources: HipHopDX, HotNewHipHop, WorldstarHiphop, MaxPreps.

Can you please let me know how I should proceed to ensure that this article gets approved?

I sincerely appreciate your time and help.

Best, Zach — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zhurwitz4 (talk • contribs) 21:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

We need to see WP:SIGCOV that isn't just routine announcements like album/single/music video releases or record deals. Those things are considered WP:ROUTINE and don't denote notability. Same logic applies to the MaxPreps source, that's just someone's sports stats page. Literally tens of thousands (if not hundreds of thousands) of people have maxpreps pages exactly like that. Sulfurboy (talk) 21:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

References Question - The Yutes (Musical Group)

Hi again,

Hope all's well on your end

Thank you for taking the time to review my submission for the musical group, The Yutes (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Yutes). Similar to my last post, I was wondering why the references I cited don't meet Wikipedia's guidlines; I used all independent sources I found online from reputable sources: HipHopDX, HotNewHipHop, and WorldstarHiphop.

When you have a moment, can you please educate me on sourcing approved references?

Thank you for all of your help and patience.

Best, Zach

See other reply as it applies here as well. Sulfurboy (talk) 21:25, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 15:55:42, 8 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Irenemoresa

• Irenemoresa (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Chelo Alvarez-Stehle (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Dear revisers, Could you help me understand how can I improve my references or how can I add footnotes? And which information does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations? I have read the guide Referencing for beginners but I don't know how can I do it better. Thank you very much.

Irenemoresa (talk) 15:55, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Irenemoresa, there are mulitple lines and claims in the article that are not supported with inline citations. biographies of living people have very strict standards on the required inline citations. Sulfurboy (talk) 01:39, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Suppressing redirects on moving drafts

I see you are still moving drafts from user space to draft space without leaving a redirect. Is that just an oversight, or do you have a good reason for doing it? JBW (talk) 22:24, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

JBW, An oversight. So by default for whatever reason the "leave a redirect" behind is unchecked when draftifying (but not when doing other moves). However, when you do it from our AfC script it's checked by default. So I think there might have been one or two times when I either checked or unchecked incorrectly. I'll just start running them all through the draftify script to avoid this confusion in the future. Thanks again. Sulfurboy (talk) 23:05, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

OK, thanks for the explanation. I wonder why it is set up to work that way. I'm not going to claim that it's a really big deal, but it does seem to me slightly better to leave a redirect, for the reason I mentioned before. JBW (talk) 23:21, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

JBW, Who knows. Probably because the scripts were created for different needs even though they both accomplish the same thing. But I do fully agree with your sentiment that it's always best to leave the redirect and since that's how it is set by default in the AfC script, then that seems the appropriate thing to do. Sulfurboy (talk) 23:27, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 00:55:21, 9 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by ArtistofWNY

• ArtistofWNY (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Alberto Rey (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, the page I am working on entitled "Alberto Rey" (a visual artist) was flagged as not being written from a neutral point of view. Could you please point out what language or parts of the article appear biased? I do not believe I used any "peacocking" language as the flag suggests. Any descriptions of his projects were not judgments or about the quality, success, or merit of his activities, but merely relaying the information I compiled. I apologize as this is my first article written for Wikipedia and though I have been reading through the many guidelines and help pages, this process is still somewhat confusing to me. Any advice is greatly appreciated. Thanks for your time. ArtistofWNY (talk) 00:55, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

ArtistofWNY (talk) 00:55, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Lord Hyeamang

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Lord Hyeamang passes WP:NGRIDIRON per [1] [2] Joeykai (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Joeykai, Neither of those sources confirm he actually played a down. Sulfurboy (talk) 03:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

I don't see how "played two games with the Alouettes in 2019" does not confirm that he actually played in those two games Joeykai (talk) 03:56, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Joeykai, Because he has to play an actual down. All that confirms is that he suited up for two games. That's two totally different things. Sulfurboy (talk) 03:57, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

[3] This should confirm he actually played in two games Joeykai (talk) 04:28, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Joeykai, Dude I'm not skimming through a 55 page pdf document to see what you're talking about. If you find a proper source that shows he played an actual down then post it on the draft. otherwise the page will continue to be declined. Sulfurboy (talk) 05:02, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Page 28 of 55 shows he got credit for actually playing in two games (i.e. yes, he played at least one down in two different games), rather than the reserve/did not play designation. And this is an official CFL document, so is definitely a 'proper source' Joeykai (talk) 05:08, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:National_Institute_of_Dramatic_Art_alumni

Hello,

You denied this originally because of lack of citations (even though most of the people's Wikipedia pages, which are linked, verify that they are alumni). Then when I took the time to source over 100 articles and bio pages on other people/organisation's websites, all of which explicitly confirm that they are alumni or have won the awards referenced, you declined it again and accused me of bombarding with "Bunch of nonsense references that have little to nothing to do with the subject." Not really sure what you want here - please advise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fefu2011 (talk • contribs) 07:34, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 21:55:07, 9 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by RajeevRuparell

• RajeevRuparell (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Ron Graham (author) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello! Thanks for reviewing the article about Ron Graham. Just wondering if there was anything particular that wasn't sourced properly?

Re: notability, I sourced a number of reviews of his books in the Globe and Mail, Canada's national newspaper, which are not written by him and are independent of him, as per the guidelines:

https://www.scribd.com/document/455596727/Globe-and-Mail-Oct-1990-Report-on-the-State-of-the-Canadian-Soul https://www.scribd.com/document/455624433/Globe-and-Mail-Oct-17-1992-All-in-la-famille https://www.scribd.com/document/455711663/Winnipeg-Free-Press-Ron-Graham https://www.scribd.com/document/455596732/Globe-and-Mail-May-2011-How-Pierre-Trudeau-changed-Can

I also included a reference to the Oxford Companion to Canadian Literature, which lists notable Canadian authors: https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/acref/9780195411676.001.0001/acref-9780195411676

Graham is a very famous / well known political author here in Canada – the hard thing about drafting his article was that most of his work was published in the 80s and 90s. :( Please let me know if there are specific things that should be removed.

I'm new to editing WP and would like to make my submissions more efficient/compliant in the future.

thanks!! :)

Rajeev

RajeevRuparell (talk) 21:55, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

A link to scribd isnt a reliable source Sulfurboy (talk) 22:07, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Conall Laverty

Draft:Conall_Laverty User_talk:Ojejinms —Preceding undated comment added 22:36, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi you just rejected my draft article for lack of notability. I do not believe this is the case as the subject has accolades in the very notable Forbes magazine and numerous Irish newspapers. These broadsheet newspapers are also credible secondary sources. Could you offer further clarity on why you rejected the submission? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ojejinms (talk • contribs) 22:24, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

responded on talk page Sulfurboy (talk) 01:38, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Knowledge Magazine is the top magazine in that genre of music

...and I've used several issues along with other credible music magazines. there are 18 credible references. so now what? Fulber (talk) 01:24, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Draft: Netrality

Thank you for reviewing my Netrality article submission and leaving feedback. You requested that I remove the press releases and external links from the body. I've removed the press releases from the article, but could you please let me know which other links/references I need to remove to make it eligible? Mikiepc (talk) 05:30, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Mikiepc, Still is full of WP:ROUTINE announcement sources and blackhat seo blogsite-like sources. Sulfurboy (talk) 15:21, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

My article got rejected-This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified

Hi Sulfurboy,

I appreciate your reviews but I don't understand how to write the reference correctly and how to check the reliability of the source? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vishakha2588 (talk • contribs) 11:10, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Vishakha2588, WP:REFB and WP:RS Sulfurboy (talk) 13:33, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Azure Data Explorer

Hi, I observe you accepted Azure Data Explorer at AfC. Did you notice these edit {Diff|Talk:Azure_Data_Explorer|950131022|950054608}} [4]. There are also a lot of WP:PRIMARY sources used on the article. Its fundamentally an appropriate subject for an article, I'm just concerned about possible bias and as an administrator hopeful I'd like you to check these points out. Thankyou. Djm-leighpark (talk) 11:59, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Djm-leighpark, Yeah I'm not going to hold a draft back that's been waiting for months and is clearly notable just because of a some minimal neutrality issues. If you take issue with the neutrality of some of the primary sourcing then either improve it or tag it. Sulfurboy (talk) 13:33, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

hello,

hey am new in here i only have two days, and i am from Tanzania where we don't speak English fluently, so its so difficult but with your reviews am trying and i hope i will succeed to create my first article. so if there is any possibilities for you to help me on the creation please help me. i will learn. i hope one day i am gonna be a better one. all in all thank you for your comment.

(talk)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moses rukanima (talk • contribs) 15:05, 10 April 2020 (UTC) 

Draft:PremjiInvest

Hello Sulfurboy! I was wondering if you could give me some more sprecific suggestions on what is should add to Draft:PremjiInvest to make it suitable to publishing on Wikipedia. Thanks in advance, Usernameisentered (talk) 16:00, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Usernameisentered, Please see the decline message on the draft page and read the linked and applicable policies. If you have questions about those specific policies, let me know. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:07, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Yes, I don't understand what is meant by "significant coverage". Usernameisentered (talk) 16:10, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Usernameisentered, WP:SIGCOV Sulfurboy (talk) 22:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Resubmitting drafts

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Re: Draft:Renowned_LA

I don't understand why Draft:Big Rick Daniels was allowed to be declined and allowed to resubmit so many times but I'm not. After the first attempt to re-submit my rejected article with the recommended changes, you said it's not allowed to be resubmitted. Why did I bother making the recommended changes then? Pilot333 (talk) 22:19, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Pilot333, I don't know why you're asking me. I didn't reject that article. Sulfurboy (talk) 22:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Look at the edit history. You edited it today, unless I have the wrong person. Are you implying I have to contact the person who rejected it and only the person who rejected it or are you implying you're unwilling to help? Pilot333 (talk) 00:20, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Pilot333, Dude, I didn't reject that page. It says in the rejection message who rejected it. Taking it up with me is pointless. Take it to their talk page if you have questions. Sulfurboy (talk) 00:26, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Could you delete the Drafts I made? I don't know how.

Thank you for showing me the "Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Redirects and categories" by the way. DJ10wiki (talk) 23:50, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

DJ10wiki, I've requested that they be deleted. Sulfurboy (talk) 23:54, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you. DJ10wiki (talk) 00:22, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Barnstar of Diligence
	For your good work at AfC. Cedix (talk) 14:34, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Jason George (writer)

Hello, Sulfurboy. I (believe I) have addressed the sourcing and notable events, as requested for https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jason_George_(writer) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtomtomtom (talk • contribs) 19:54, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Tanaza https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tanaza

I have not any type of economy according to the company in order to create the page. I contest the fact the sources are reliable: there are references from Il Sole 24 ore (one of the most important European economic newspaper) Facebook Engineering Blog and lots of articles from newspapers of Wi-Fi sector. There are also references to two United States Patent and Trademark Office!!

From the point of view of neutrality, the article simply describes what Tanaza is and what it does. I cannot avoid talking about of the awards and partnership because they are parts of Tanaza history. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marco Papavero (talk • contribs) 21:38, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Marco Papavero, Who is the we you are referring to? The article is riddled with press releases, it is clear you have not reviewed our policies about WP:RS Sulfurboy (talk) 21:42, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi

What was the problem with my draft Maizbhandariya (talk) 01:31, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

draft Barakat-Perenthaler syndrome

hi! You rejected my draft Draft_talk:Barakat-Perenthaler_syndrome saying it would not be supported by reliable sources. This I do not understand, as the page is referring to well known medical sources (such as Acta Neuropathologica (the 1st ranked journal in pathology), Online Mendelian Inheritance in Man (OMIM) (the standard resource in clinical genetics) and other papers such as those in Nature Communication). So I do not completely get what you think is not referred appropriately? Grateful to hear some feedback. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.238.220.59 (talk) 10:07, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

hi. I've added a lot of details to the references...

do you think it's ready to go? Fulber (talk) 01:59, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Dulchasar

G5? I'll leave the choice to you. Cabayi (talk) 06:58, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Cabayi, I feel like this is one of those spots WP:IGNORE might apply. It's just a stub article about a town, so there feels like there's zero chance of it becoming promotional or controversial which is the two things I'd typically worry most about from a blocked user. Either way, other than promoting it out of AfC, I have zero attachment to this article so don't really care one way or another. Sulfurboy (talk) 07:05, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:OCR World Championships

Hi Sulfurboy,

Firstly, I cannot thank you enough for your time and hard work in unpicking what my article on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:OCR_World_Championships was needing.

It is a bit of a pickle, as our sport is not one for a ton of big name media sources, and as you can see in the Spartan Race page here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spartan_Race and the Tough Mudder one here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tough_Muddertheir sources are very similar. We cannot honestly do a tremendous amount about that if we are to back up claims made. The sources used are legal entities, but not the big name sources generally asked for. However, we are very well known entities and both of their pages have been accepted with the same styles as my own and the formatting is very similar.

I was not paid for this article per se, I am an employee of the company and was asked to write it. If I need to change something in my user page, I am VERY happy to, I was under the impression that I had disclosed things as needed.

Any further guidance here would be massively appreciated. Again, thank you for taking the time.

Pixicorn 14:23, 13 April 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rachelanne Schiller (talk • contribs)

Rachelanne Schiller First, just because another article exists, doesn't mean yours should WP:INN. Secondly, it doesn't matter if you have been directly paid for creating the page, if you are an employee of the company that means you have a financial stake in the subject and need to properly disclose. Lastly, if you cannot find proper sources to denote notability under our guidelines then that means your subject is not notable and as such an article about it will not be accepted at this time. Sulfurboy (talk) 14:28, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Joshua Cinnamo

Hi! Thank you for the feedback on my submission. I have reviewed and taken care of some citations that I mistakenly placed links on. I'd love to have you review it again and provide additional feedback should there be the necessity for it.

Thanks!

Loyal

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