User talk:GoingBatty

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Review comments on Draft: Kamal Chawla

Hello,

Thanks for the review of article! I have resolved all the comments you had on the article. Just wanted to check if there are any further review comments and what would be the next step. Kcsnooker (talk) 18:42, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kcsnooker: It seems you mention most medals up to four times (in the medal table, in the "Snooker Career" section, in the "Identity at National Level"/"International Career" sections, and in the "INTERNATIONAL"/"NATIONALS" sections), so I suggest you remove some of the redundancy. Also, please remove the reference to the Wikipedia article, per WP:CIRCULAR. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 01:14, 25 June 2020 (UTC)

FYI

 – Combined sections on the same topic. Please don't start a new section every time you want to continue a conversation.

Thank you for the feedback again! I have removed Wiki citation to avoid circular reference and also cut short medals section to avoid redundancy. Now there is a National & International career section with details on the matches/results and a list of medals. Please let me know if you have any further comments.

Also, any pointers on how much more time it can take the article to be published? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kcsnooker (talk • contribs) 18:53, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kcsnooker: As stated on Draft:Kamal Chawla, "Review waiting, please be patient. This may take 6 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 2,132 pending submissions waiting for review." (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 19:00, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Joint Artificial Intelligence Center (JAIC)

GoingBatty GoingBatty

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Joint_Artificial_Intelligence_Center_(JAIC)

please re-revew my article so it can become a Wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RJJ4y7 (talk • contribs) 21:35, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

@RJJ4y7: I'll help you fix the formatting, and let someone else do the review. (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 23:23, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

thanks for the help with edits. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RJJ4y7 (talk • contribs) 14:32, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Draft Shamsher Singh (Journalist)

Hello GoingBatty, Thanks for reviewing my article. As per your comment on the parents section, I don't have a URL citation for the medals Surendra Narayan Singh recieved, but, I have a photo of him in his army uniform with all the medals. So, can I use that photo for citation?
Also, similarly the there is a photograph of the Chinta-O-Chetna Award also.
So, kindly answer my questions so that I can resubmit the article for review.SinghPurnima72 (talk) 03:42, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@SinghPurnima72: Your personal photos cannot be used as references for the draft about your husband - see Wikipedia:Independent sources. GoingBatty (talk) 03:52, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

I have removed the lines which didn't have proper citations, so can you check it now please and give your valuable feedback.SinghPurnima72 (talk) 05:09, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@SinghPurnima72: In Draft:Shamsher Singh (journalist), there still are no references for the "Early life" section. You could also fix/update each reference. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 05:20, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@GoingBatty I have removed many lines from the Early life section which needed citations, can you review it now and please give me your valuable feedback.SinghPurnima72 (talk) 08:08, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@SinghPurnima72: There are still no references for the "Early life" section, and it appears you made no effort to fix the references. GoingBatty (talk) 14:55, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Editing

Hello there GoingBatty. I noticed that you edited the page that im currently creating and having trouble with... but i dont see any notice.

May i know what else is to improve on? I have done necessary improvement from previous reviewer, about putting legit references... Thank you for your help! :D

here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Samuel_Somerville — Preceding unsigned comment added by Athirah Hanapi (talk • contribs) 09:05, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@Athirah Hanapi: I made some more updates for you. Reference #7 needs to be fixed, as the Slough Town home page doesn't have any info on Somerville. Why are the infobox stats only updated through 19 April 2015? Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 15:08, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

hello again, GoingBatty. Thank you so much for your help. it seems that both references #7 and #8 are the same. but i am having trouble to delete #7. may i know how to delete the reference. ive tried searching it in wikihelp, but theres no specific ways mentioned to delete reference. and i deleted infobox stat because he hasnt join any national team yet. thank you in advance --Athirah Hanapi (talk) 04:39, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

@Athirah Hanapi: I deleted the reference in this edit. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 13:09, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

Thank you so much!!! --Athirah Hanapi (talk) 04:01, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Article you reviewed.

Hello, I made the changes you suggested to the biography of Kim Kraig Thompson that I wrote. I had made changes to the Kriag Biocraft Laboratories page as I am very interested in spider silk and was pleased with my work and went on to write the biography. Can you please review it for publication?

Thank you Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 12:53, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: I made some edits and suggestions for you at Draft:Kim Kraig Thompson. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 15:17, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

ACEH

Why you change information about aceh etnich and religion in aceh

Am FROM ACEH , STAY IN ACEH , Moh Adam knorkt (talk) 16:15, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

@Moh Adam knorkt: As I tried to explain in my edit summary, I reverted your incorrect edits on the Aceh article because your edits introduced incorrect links (e.g "Confusion"), misspellings (e.g. "Budha"), and the percentages you added don't equal 100%. Per the Wikipedia:BOLD, revert, discuss cycle, I suggest you start a conversation on the article talk page – Talk:Aceh – so other interested editors can help you improve the article. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 16:30, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Untitled

I would like to ask what did i lack while making the page Draft:Abhijeet Andhare — Preceding unsigned comment added by God Rex (talk • contribs) 09:47, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

@God Rex: I moved your comment to the bottom of this page – please review Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines. Draft:Abhijeet Andhare has no references, while User:God Rex/sandbox has references but no footnotes. The big red box on User:God Rex/sandbox has four links to Wikipedia guidelines to references and footnotes – I hope you will click on each one and read them. Happy editing! (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 13:25, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

So can you please help me know what do i do? Now God Rex (talk) 08:21, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

@God Rex: Now that you have read each of the documents linked on User:God Rex/sandbox, I suggest you decide whether you want to work on Draft:Abhijeet Andhare or User:God Rex/sandbox. Read each of the independent reliable sources you found and summarize what each says in your draft. Add the references in the same format you used in User:God Rex/sandbox, but place the <ref>...</ref> tag after the relevant sentence. Then read Template:Cite web and change each reference to use this template. with the author, title, publisher, and date. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 21:30, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll continue with User:God Rex/sandbox and i guess there's issues with reference? Can you be more specific about references? Can I use YouTube vidoes with much higher reach? Please answer this last question. Thank you! God Rex (talk) 08:36, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

@God Rex: On User:God Rex/sandbox and User talk:God Rex, there's a gray box that states "The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners." Please click on each of the four links in these sentences and read each document so you will understand how to move and format your references. Using YouTube videos for references depends on the publisher of the videos – please read Wikipedia:Video links. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 16:17, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks

God Rex (talk) 21:50, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Checking Draft: Abdullahi Dauda Belel

Please,sir help me in reviewing this draft. No any one respond to the draft. Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 23:23, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: The yellow template on Draft:Abdullahi Dauda Belel states "Review waiting, please be patient. This may take 6 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 2,243 pending submissions waiting for review." While you're patiently waiting, I suggest you make sure everything either has a reliable source or is removed. Most of the statements in the "Early life and education" section are unreferenced. In the "Later life and career" section, the first paragraph could be changed from one long run-on sentence to multiple sentences. References #3 and 4 do not seem to mention NSHIP. I don't understand reference #18, and suggest you change it so it links directly to the correct document. There are other typos that you can fix as well. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 03:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Okay thank you so much for the correction, I will fix them now Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 07:14, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

bw from today

This is not all of them but some that I could recover.

Birds of Prey

• A History of British Birds
• Great Britain commemorative stamps 2010–19
• Thorp Perrow Arboretum
• Hatchett Hill
• Tarboo Unit
• History of Woking
• List of Malaysian stamps

Mom

• Kids' Voice Awards

Space Force

• Variety Studio: Actors on Actors

Apple

• Smart Keyboard Folio
• Smart Keyboard

-- GreenC 00:17, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

@GreenC: Thank you for the list, as it helped me fix a few articles. However, these were not all added today. For example, the Mom link was in Kids' Voice Awards since the article was created in 2008. Thanks! GoingBatty (talk) 01:15, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Hopefully things will be sorted out with the next run. I have an idea what to try next if it still happens. -- GreenC 01:34, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

It happened again, but this time it was reproducible with Space Force and Slipknot due to those two naturally having 0 mainspace backlinks - the bug shows up when there are no backlinks such as an API timeout, or like these two. I was able to track down a bug in an external library function (local var incorrectly defined as global), it makes sense given what happened. -- GreenC 16:44, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

I had email disabled for testing and forgot to re-enable following is what should have come through:

Extended content

======= Blackberry ======= Backlinks Watchlist ------------------------------ 1 new backlinks for Blackberry Additions (added to /data/project/botwikiawk/bw/Blackberry.add ): List of applications with iCalendar support ======= Empire ======= Backlinks Watchlist ------------------------------ 1 new backlinks for Empire Additions (added to /data/project/botwikiawk/bw/Empire.add ): Political history of the world ======= peanuts ======= Backlinks Watchlist ------------------------------ 1 new backlinks for peanuts Additions (added to /data/project/botwikiawk/bw/peanuts.add ): Croton glandulosus ======= Slipknot ======= Backlinks Watchlist ------------------------------ 2 new backlinks for Slipknot Additions (added to /data/project/botwikiawk/bw/Slipknot.add ): Pulp Summer Slam Disturbed (band) ======= The Witcher ======= Backlinks Watchlist ------------------------------ 1 new backlinks for The Witcher Additions (added to /data/project/botwikiawk/bw/The Witcher.add ): Joachim (given name)

-- GreenC 13:19, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

@GreenC: Thanks - I've fixed these articles. GoingBatty (talk) 19:04, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

A Barnstar for you!

Here is a barnstar for your review on my article which is now approved by Akmgp ! Thanks a lot for your help and I hope someday I will become a great Wikipedia editor like you.SinghPurnima72 (talk) 03:30, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Red links?

Since I can't create articles yet could I get some red links to work on? Printsess4277 (talk) 04:56, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

@Printsess4277: I don't know if there's a list of red links to work on, but you might find Wikipedia:Red link helpful. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 21:24, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Incorporated your suggestions into Kim Kraig Thompson proposed wiki entry

Hello,

I have incorporated your suggestions for citations into the wiki page I wrote for Kim Kraig Thompson. Thank you for taking the time to assist me. I am very much enjoying writing and learning the process! I would greatly appreciate it if you would again review my proposed entry for publication. Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 13:55, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: I looked at Draft:Kim Kraig Thompson and see that you added references to the "Education" section. In the "Achievements" section, I hope you will replace "recently" with a year or date. I hope you also can convert the references to full citations – see the links in the box I added to the "References" section a few days ago. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 16:07, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

July 2, 2020 Good morning, I substituted an actual date for "recently" and I used the refill. Please review my submission to ensure I did it right. thank you! Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 12:29, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: Looks better, but reFill doesn't get everything perfect – References 2, 4, and 15 still need to be updated. When you fix those, you can remove the {{cleanup bare URLs}} template. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 02:09, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

July 3, 2020 - Hi, I've fixed the links. I appreciate you taking the time to help me through this process! Please take another look at my submission. Have a great day!Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 12:54, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: Looks better, but reference #4 is still a bare URL, and the last/first parameters on reference #15 are incorrect. Keep up the good work! GoingBatty (talk) 19:19, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

July 3rd 2020 I think I've fixed the link now. Please review it and if I haven't then I might need some more guideneMopbroomdustpan (talk) 23:43, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: I see you're continuing to improve it. I updated a lot of the references and fixed some typos. Could you please fix the ambiguous link to recombinant? Thanks! GoingBatty (talk) 00:31, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

July 4th 2020. :@GoingBatty: I changed the link - recombinant to recombinant DNA. Thank you so much for your help! Please review this article for publication. Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 12:17, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

@Mopbroomdustpan: Using {{ping}} is redundant on a user's own talk page, and doesn't work when you don't add your signature in the same edit. For more information, see Template:Reply to. GoingBatty (talk) 02:50, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for letting me know! I am still in the early stages of my learning and I am really looking forward to learning more! Thank you again for all of your help. Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 12:32, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Please review my submission for publication. Thank you again Mopbroomdustpan (talk) 20:52, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Sukhpal Sukh

Hello brother... Kindly look into draft page Named Sukhpal Sukh which was moved to draft. As per your suggestions i made some corrections and added more reference into page for more credibility. Kindly move this article to main space now..will be thankful VirdiOnline (talk) 17:17, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

@VirdiOnline: I took a look at Draft:Sukhpal Sukh again today. I suggest you format each reference with Template:Cite web or Template:Cite news. Film titles and album titles should be italicized, while song titles should be in quotation marks. I also suggest you reduce the number of entries in the External links section per Wikipedia:External links. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 01:59, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

@GoingBatty: Hello brother as per your order i have made some corrections. references are formatted into cite web and cite news template and quotation marks added where required. kindly take a look and move this article into main space thanks and regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by VirdiOnline (talk • contribs) 10:25, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

@VirdiOnline: Song titles should be in quotation marks, but not italicized. (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 13:01, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

@GoingBatty: hello brother. Titles are now edited as per your orders. Kindly check and move that article to main space now. Thanks and regards VirdiOnline (talk) 16:13, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

@GoingBatty: hello brother..as per your suggestions almost whole article is edited. This article has been in draft for a long time. So im requesting you to move this article to main space as early as possible brother.Thanks & regards

VirdiOnline (talk) 16:36, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

transport united fc

https://www.facebook.com/580272852120091/posts/1611387935675239/

Please add new logo on page — Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.131.82.140 (talk) 16:42, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

I see ArnabSaha already uploaded File:Transport United FC logo.jpg, but I replaced it with a complete and smaller version. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 19:16, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

How To Submit Articles

Well done sir, please I need help on how to submit my draft for reviewing. Here with me are Draft: Khalil Haliru, Draft: Gordon Tredgold and Draft: Africa Polling Institute. Please sir, I will need your assistance to guide me on how to submit it or by submitting all for reviewing. Thank you sir Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 10:27, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: Looks like all three of these drafts have already been submitted for review. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 23:17, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

Added reference

Hi I have added a reference to the draft { Ref no.4 } https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Mudasir_Zafar New Article covers a sifnificant coverage and not just passing mentions.Need Feedback..Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by 43.248.69.206 (talk) 14:28, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

I have updated the references. Instead of an "Upcoming projects" section, I suggest you have a "Career" section where you discuss both My Friends Dulhania and Nobel Peace. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 23:30, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

Thank you

Career Section added instead of Upcoming projects.I have added some more information about his past projects like Tu lage Jaan se pyara and Tension mat le yaar which I was able to find online. Please let me know if that detail is alright to add.

I was editing the page for the original professional Wrestling Championship because I noticed some omissions. It was my first edit, so I made a lot of mistakes and what should have taken me 20 minutes took me 2 days. I made a lot of edits to fix mistakes for I was only copying the format used by other editors. Anyway, thank you for clearing up some of those mistakes (mainly the fact I couldn't make some articles headers after I made a new one). Very much appreciated. James George Bryan (talk) 19:11, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

@James George Bryan: I presume you're referring to the World Heavyweight Wrestling Championship (original version) article. I made some additional edits today. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 23:46, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

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Indian film lists with multiple DABlinks

I've now identified six IP editors who have been bulk-removing the piped parts of links, as in List of Bollywood films of 2011, landing us with the familiar "This article currently links to a large number of disambiguation pages (or back to itself)" template. Now that I've seen what's going on, I've started reverting rather than repairing. If you find any others, ping me; I'd like to catch an active one with a view to a WP:BLOCK request at WP:ANI. Narky Blert (talk) 12:26, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

@Narky Blert: Thanks for the heads up. GoingBatty (talk) 00:14, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

A bit more digging, and I found a seventh - who was active. WP:ANI#IP editors breaking links in Indian film-related lists will be good precedent if this timesink reappears. Narky Blert (talk) 06:40, 11 July 2020 (UTC)