User contributions for 173.162.211.85

11 March 2022

• 18:5618:56, 11 March 2022 diff hist +134‎ The Jesus Rolls ‎ Fixed grammar, Added many links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

10 March 2022

• 15:5615:56, 10 March 2022 diff hist +779‎ User talk:173.162.211.85 ‎ →‎October 2021: Reply Tag: Reply

7 March 2022

• 17:4217:42, 7 March 2022 diff hist +13‎ Optical resolution ‎ ditto Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 17:3917:39, 7 March 2022 diff hist +136‎ Optical resolution ‎ there was nothing truly *wrong* in the version that I found, but there were so many imprecisions that very few readers would have avoided confusion by the old wording, leading to failure to absorb its intent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 16:0616:06, 7 March 2022 diff hist +1‎ Optical resolution ‎ + syntactically crucial comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 16:0316:03, 7 March 2022 diff hist +96‎ Optical resolution ‎ smoothing of syntax, and a tad more detail Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

1 March 2022

• 16:5516:55, 1 March 2022 diff hist +323‎ Xmas ‎ Added links & detail Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

6 November 2021

• 01:4501:45, 6 November 2021 diff hist +32‎ Vinod Gupta ‎ added “; often mentioned as "Vin Gupta"” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

5 November 2021

• 09:3909:39, 5 November 2021 diff hist +103‎ Ricardo Cavallo ‎ serious restruc. & clarification Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 08:4308:43, 5 November 2021 diff hist +98‎ Serpico (disambiguation) ‎ added structure, corrected presentation of an article link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

2 November 2021

• 00:4800:48, 2 November 2021 diff hist +9‎ Interstate 91 ‎ 2 similar locations, not 2 similar situations at same location Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 00:2800:28, 2 November 2021 diff hist +11‎ Interstate 91 ‎ etc. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

1 November 2021

• 20:2420:24, 1 November 2021 diff hist −5‎ Interstate 91 ‎ “In Hartford, I-91 it has a set…” was syntactic nonsense, & rep’n of the noun the worse choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 06:1106:11, 1 November 2021 diff hist −208‎ Jungle division ‎ Remedied my confused perception about the units and campaigns calling for parallel construction of campaigns and organizations Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 06:0306:03, 1 November 2021 diff hist +6‎ Jungle division ‎ Re-organized enumerations of units and campaigns Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:5805:58, 1 November 2021 diff hist +59‎ Jungle division ‎ touch-ups Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:1405:14, 1 November 2021 diff hist +4‎ Pez ‎ corrected vague ref to capacity of multiple dispensers Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:0505:05, 1 November 2021 diff hist +1‎ Star Wars Pez ‎ phenomena —> phenomenon, in absence of any mention of multi-phenomena Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

31 October 2021

• 07:4407:44, 31 October 2021 diff hist +125‎ Affine ‎ Rationalized format, while deferring question of whether page should declared, and organized as, a WP:Disambiguation page Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:0907:09, 31 October 2021 diff hist +34‎ Talk:Absolute geometry ‎ Minimal editing info Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:2201:22, 31 October 2021 diff hist −4‎ Cathedral ‎ No “if” nor 2nd “but” was needed. Users’ potential efforts to tease out some subtle 2nd-level opposition are simply abusive. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

30 October 2021

• 07:5107:51, 30 October 2021 diff hist +1‎ Dental plaque ‎ that —> those Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

29 October 2021

• 05:3805:38, 29 October 2021 diff hist +12‎ Subtext ‎ corrections re my careless syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:2905:29, 29 October 2021 diff hist −70‎ Subtext ‎ various tweaks, many related to the dual-audience issues Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 04:2704:27, 29 October 2021 diff hist −3‎ Subtext ‎ lots of minor changes of nuance Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 04:2004:20, 29 October 2021 diff hist +10‎ Subtext ‎ Smoother presentation of the dual-meaning aspect. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

27 October 2021

• 06:1506:15, 27 October 2021 diff hist +2‎ Malaysian Chinese ‎ “happened” suggests lack of intent; “took place” suggests intentional and pre-planned action. I lack topic background, so my contrib might be less helpful than disruptive, but in any case a more specific verb probably is desirable. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:1405:14, 27 October 2021 diff hist 0‎ Dendrodendritic synapse ‎ these cellular structures are not subject to trademarking, and remain common rather than proper nouns Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

24 October 2021

• 07:1407:14, 24 October 2021 diff hist +618‎ User talk:173.162.211.85 ‎ →‎October 2021: Oops!
• 06:2506:25, 24 October 2021 diff hist +139‎ What Women Want ‎ dealing with the obscure RBE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:4605:46, 24 October 2021 diff hist +13‎ What Women Want ‎ Repunctuated, largely to suggest the intention of the items mentioned in each individual description. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:3105:31, 24 October 2021 diff hist +47‎ What Women Want ‎ comment material only Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 01:2001:20, 24 October 2021 diff hist 0‎ What Women Want ‎ Fixed grammar: who he … with —> with whom he … Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

23 October 2021

• 01:5501:55, 23 October 2021 diff hist +7‎ Pachinko ‎ Polished English usage (which was already better than my mastery of German-as-a-foreign language!) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

21 October 2021

• 14:3414:34, 21 October 2021 diff hist +1‎ Curtis Sliwa ‎ “of unarmed crime prevention —> “unarmed crime prevention” —> “for unarmed crime prevention”: “of” denotes components; this is abt the purpose, not the composition of the entity being described. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 13:4213:42, 21 October 2021 diff hist +4‎ Long Duration Exposure Facility ‎ more user-friendly markup for elliptical-remark Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

20 October 2021

• 11:5111:51, 20 October 2021 diff hist −4‎ Emmanuelle (video game) ‎ c’est la vie! Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 11:4711:47, 20 October 2021 diff hist +19‎ Emmanuelle (video game) ‎ the noble French tongue is largely abused, in translating it into English. C’est la vie! Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

19 October 2021

• 07:3307:33, 19 October 2021 diff hist +3,534‎ The Ice Storm (film) ‎ lots of logic & syntax, but too much crud to be fixed in one edit Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

18 October 2021

• 06:3306:33, 18 October 2021 diff hist +35‎ Exiled: A Law & Order Movie ‎ Put my “ (two-hour-format) “ spec’n into proper wiki-format Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:1806:18, 18 October 2021 diff hist +12‎ List of Law & Order episodes ‎ →‎Season 5 (1994–95): Mostly flow & de-redundifying Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0306:03, 18 October 2021 diff hist +48‎ Law & Order: Special Victims Unit season 12 ‎ Same details, but smoother flow & more specificity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:3905:39, 18 October 2021 diff hist +13‎ Law & Order: Special Victims Unit season 12 ‎ same entry; remains a bit clumsy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 05:2005:20, 18 October 2021 diff hist +3‎ Law & Order: Special Victims Unit season 12 ‎ reword plot-sum from “… for …” to “has repeatedly attacked her within the past fifteen years.” hmm, “over” perhaps better yet Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 02:0302:03, 18 October 2021 diff hist 0‎ Kara Hultgreen ‎ In the absence of contrary evidence, presumably a sibling, rather than a member of a religious order Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

17 October 2021

• 02:0902:09, 17 October 2021 diff hist +1‎ Aviator (disambiguation) ‎ Fixed grammar: '''Aviator''' also may refer to: <br> This “may” carries not tolerance nor permission re the subordinate senses, but rather the existence of multiple usages for, or meanings of, the given spelling Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

13 October 2021

• 19:5519:55, 13 October 2021 diff hist +153‎ Talk:Xanthine ‎ →‎Sorry, like saiid, i‘m no chemist: what I, and I think the medical professions, call anthines or xanthine drugs, are all purines =
• 19:2619:26, 13 October 2021 diff hist +8‎ Xanthine ‎ Syntactic clarifications Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:2119:21, 13 October 2021 diff hist +39‎ Pi bond ‎ Minor changes in syntax for greater clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 October 2021

• 14:5614:56, 12 October 2021 diff hist +4‎ Dreadlocks ‎ Added links Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit