User contributions for 74.58.147.69

23 February 2020

• 01:2201:22, 23 February 2020 diff hist −4‎ Criminal Minds ‎ (m) Grammar

20 February 2020

• 16:4516:45, 20 February 2020 diff hist +556‎ User talk:ClueBot Commons ‎ →‎Is the “Edit summary” taken into consideration at all by ClueBot NG?: Replied to AntiCompositeNumber
• 14:2014:20, 20 February 2020 diff hist −19‎ Phonograph record ‎ Minor correction in lead: it's not the capacity (duration) of the disc that provides space for visual expression on its sleeve; it's its size.
• 14:1614:16, 20 February 2020 diff hist +887‎ User talk:ClueBot Commons ‎ →‎Is the “Edit summary” taken into consideration at all by ClueBot NG?: new section
• 14:1614:16, 20 February 2020 diff hist −1,280‎ User talk:74.58.147.69 ‎ Deleted bot warning as instructed. Tag: Blanking

19 February 2020

• 18:2218:22, 19 February 2020 diff hist −19‎ Phonograph record ‎ Minor correction in lead: it's not the capacity (duration) of the disc that provides space for visual expression on its sleeve; it's its size.

18 February 2020

• 13:2313:23, 18 February 2020 diff hist −39‎ MTY Food Group ‎ →‎Allô! Mon Coco: Removed dead link Tag: references removed

9 February 2020

• 14:5714:57, 9 February 2020 diff hist −23‎ Dude food ‎ Removed unwarranted {{when}} tag from the lead because the first sentence of the next section supplies the necessary information.

8 February 2020

• 22:3522:35, 8 February 2020 diff hist −34‎ The Nines ‎ Removed assertion in the lead about the title being “stylized as The NIN9S” because this was unsourced and because the official logo uses a 9 that is flipped vertically so as to make it look like a lowercase “e”.

4 February 2020

• 16:5116:51, 4 February 2020 diff hist +2‎ Aum (disambiguation) ‎ Corrected heading level

19 January 2020

• 19:1919:19, 19 January 2020 diff hist −95‎ Public Radio Exchange ‎ Removed "Outdated" tag, because the requested info (about the merger) is already present: see last paragraph of "History" section.

17 January 2020

• 15:5215:52, 17 January 2020 diff hist +6‎ Earwax ‎ Added the color "gray" in first paragraph of lead, to be coherent with second paragraph of 'Physiology' section.

18 December 2019

• 17:3717:37, 18 December 2019 diff hist −9‎ Cenotaph (Montreal) ‎ Rephrased lead in order to avoid possible confusion.

16 December 2019

• 20:2020:20, 16 December 2019 diff hist +310‎ David Morley (writer) ‎ Added mention of radio play "Massachusetts Avenue".

9 December 2019

• 14:4414:44, 9 December 2019 diff hist −53‎ Hot Diggity (Dog Ziggity Boom) ‎ Consolidated info that was repeated in the lead.

7 December 2019

• 23:1123:11, 7 December 2019 diff hist +93‎ Akhnaten (opera) ‎ →‎Roles: Completed cast list for 2019 Met premiere

30 October 2019

• 16:5216:52, 30 October 2019 diff hist +195‎ List of Amazon products and services ‎ →‎Amazon Dash: Completed section on "Dash" for coherence with main article

24 October 2019

• 15:3015:30, 24 October 2019 diff hist −24‎ Non-Aligned Movement ‎ Undid revision 763518195 by Benyamin-ln (talk) There is no reason why one of the previous chairpersons (Ahmadinejad) would be singled out with his on navbox at the end of the NAM article; the article already contains a list of all previous chairpersons with a link for each one. Tag: Undo

5 September 2019

• 16:1316:13, 5 September 2019 diff hist +196‎ Fontainebleau Miami Beach ‎ →‎Film, television and music history: Added mention of the Grand Hotel TV series.

27 August 2019

• 20:3720:37, 27 August 2019 diff hist −61‎ Osteoporosis ‎ →‎Nonmodifiable: Removed unsourced mention of "early menopause/hysterectomy" as predisposing factors because those are effectively already mentioned in the first bullet.
• 20:1720:17, 27 August 2019 diff hist +821‎ Talk:Public-key cryptography ‎ →‎Trim and tidy: Reply to BBird

22 August 2019

• 00:1400:14, 22 August 2019 diff hist 0‎ Oscar Bettison ‎ →‎Selected works: Works are usually listed in chronological order, not reverse.
• 00:0300:03, 22 August 2019 diff hist +59‎ Bettison ‎ Added Oscar Bettison

16 August 2019

• 17:2217:22, 16 August 2019 diff hist −1‎ Amazon CloudFront ‎ Typo

7 August 2019

• 23:1023:10, 7 August 2019 diff hist +31‎ East Germany balloon escape ‎ Added mention of 2018 film in infobox and corrected its title in the 'Aftermath' section

4 August 2019

• 23:1923:19, 4 August 2019 diff hist +977‎ Talk:Pringles ‎ →‎Confusing mentions of ingredients: new section

27 July 2019

• 21:4121:41, 27 July 2019 diff hist +114‎ Mark Campbell ‎ Added titles of two opera libretti

30 June 2019

• 00:2300:23, 30 June 2019 diff hist +1,777‎ Talk:Wagner's Dream ‎ →‎Cleaned up assertions that did not originate in the film: new section
• 00:2300:23, 30 June 2019 diff hist −129‎ Wagner's Dream ‎ →‎Description: Changed or removed unsubstantiated claims. See Talk page at this date.

25 June 2019

• 15:0415:04, 25 June 2019 diff hist +207‎ Claire Benedict ‎ →‎Radio: Added radio play "The Invisible"

5 June 2019

• 19:2119:21, 5 June 2019 diff hist +321‎ Talk:Human overpopulation ‎ →‎Laws regulating history?: new section

24 May 2019

• 22:0522:05, 24 May 2019 diff hist +8‎ Laurent Petitgirard ‎ →‎Biography and career: Adjusted for timeliness

22 April 2019

• 12:4912:49, 22 April 2019 diff hist 0‎ Nineteenth-century theatre ‎ →‎Sources: Correction to layout

31 March 2019

• 19:3819:38, 31 March 2019 diff hist 0‎ Talk:432 Park Avenue ‎ →‎Number of floors and number of apartments?
• 19:3719:37, 31 March 2019 diff hist +833‎ Talk:432 Park Avenue ‎ →‎Number of floors and number of apartments?: new section

4 March 2019

• 14:3714:37, 4 March 2019 diff hist +37‎ Margaret Somerville ‎ Fixed one external link and adjusted lead for timeliness.

9 February 2019

• 17:4717:47, 9 February 2019 diff hist −73‎ Play:3 ‎ Removed dead link from Infobox. (Product page will never return because product is discontinued.)

5 February 2019

• 19:0619:06, 5 February 2019 diff hist +14‎ Francis turbine ‎ In the lead, replaced link to 'wicket gate' article (which supplies no additional information in the context of turbines) with a link to the 'Water turbin' article.

30 January 2019

• 15:0615:06, 30 January 2019 diff hist +9‎ Distributed version control ‎ Added precision to lead, for timeliness.

15 January 2019

• 15:3015:30, 15 January 2019 diff hist +1‎ Nicholas Maw ‎ →‎Personal life: Corrected link to article on Sophie's Choice opera (not film)

21 December 2018

• 17:2717:27, 21 December 2018 diff hist −103‎ General Motors streetcar conspiracy ‎ →‎Role in decline of the streetcars: The fact that the DVD commentary does contain that quote is indisputable. Therefore, how could there be a better source for the quote?

20 December 2018

• 02:2302:23, 20 December 2018 diff hist 0‎ Translohr ‎ Corrected one link

30 November 2018

• 01:3201:32, 30 November 2018 diff hist −101‎ Tianjin ‎ →‎Transport{{anchor|Transportation}}: Removed stub "Tram" sub-section of the "Rapid transit" section because there was already a "Trams" section at the same level as "Rapid transit". Tag: section blanking

26 November 2018

• 23:0923:09, 26 November 2018 diff hist −13‎ Archambault ‎ →‎History: Corrected grammar
• 23:0623:06, 26 November 2018 diff hist +63‎ Archambault ‎ Added precision to a caption, for timeliness

24 November 2018

• 16:3416:34, 24 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Lilies (play) ‎ Corrected capitalization of the title in French.

14 November 2018

• 18:4218:42, 14 November 2018 diff hist +82‎ Anne Innis Dagg ‎ →‎Career: Added mention of the 2018 documentary film about Dagg.
• 18:3618:36, 14 November 2018 diff hist +8‎ Anne Innis Dagg ‎ →‎Career: Re-worded cumbersome sentence.

11 November 2018

• 01:1601:16, 11 November 2018 diff hist −8‎ Florence Cathedral ‎ →‎Dome: Added two more metric conversions.
• 01:1201:12, 11 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Florence Cathedral ‎ →‎Dome: Added one proper metric conversion.