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25 November 2009
- 17:2117:21, 25 November 2009 diff hist +21 Naval Base Kitsap →Bangor Annex: correcting my typographical errors
- 17:1717:17, 25 November 2009 diff hist +625 Naval Base Kitsap Replacing obscure jargon and acronyms with Plain English for the general reader, and also adding additional information.
- 16:5316:53, 25 November 2009 diff hist −23 Bangor Base, Washington No edit summary
- 16:5216:52, 25 November 2009 diff hist +7 Bangor Base, Washington No edit summary
- 16:4816:48, 25 November 2009 diff hist +11 Bangor →United States
- 03:2803:28, 25 November 2009 diff hist +19 Batavia No edit summary
- 03:1903:19, 25 November 2009 diff hist +11 Basil Poledouris →Biography
- 03:1703:17, 25 November 2009 diff hist +2 Basil Poledouris →Biography: This article was sprinkled with unnecessary jargon throughout, and I have corrected this to use Plain English that everyone can understand, rather then being mislead.
- 03:1503:15, 25 November 2009 diff hist +222 Basil Poledouris →Biography: The way that this article was written and punctuated, it indicated that "Starship Troopers" was a sequel to "Free Willy", which is of couse, specious!
- 00:2200:22, 25 November 2009 diff hist +4 Louis Bonaparte No edit summary
- 00:2100:21, 25 November 2009 diff hist +520 Louis Bonaparte This article had been full of the pronouns "he" or "his", where their antecedants could have been Napoleon Bonaparte, Louis Bonaparte, or some other man, and it was not clear at all. Have repaired.
24 November 2009
- 23:5523:55, 24 November 2009 diff hist +393 Louis Bonaparte Louis Bonaparte's "son" was not identified rather early in the article, and he could have been one of two different boys born to Hortense.
- 23:1623:16, 24 November 2009 diff hist +77 Batavia (region) Adding more information to the article on Batavia.
- 23:1423:14, 24 November 2009 diff hist +320 Batavia (region) No edit summary
- 22:5822:58, 24 November 2009 diff hist +28 Batavia, Illinois No edit summary
- 22:5722:57, 24 November 2009 diff hist −54 Batavia, Illinois No edit summary
- 22:5522:55, 24 November 2009 diff hist +47 Batavia, Illinois No edit summary
- 21:1921:19, 24 November 2009 diff hist +295 Sully Sullenberger →Flight 1549: Clearing up some small, unclear statements, correcting unnecessary jargon with real English, correcting punctuation mistakes, and so forth.
- 20:5820:58, 24 November 2009 diff hist +42 Sully Sullenberger →Other Awards and Honors
- 20:5720:57, 24 November 2009 diff hist +15 Sully Sullenberger →Politics
- 20:5620:56, 24 November 2009 diff hist +161 Sully Sullenberger →Awards and honors
- 20:4720:47, 24 November 2009 diff hist +7 Sully Sullenberger →Awards and honors
- 20:4620:46, 24 November 2009 diff hist +20 Sully Sullenberger →Personal life
- 20:4520:45, 24 November 2009 diff hist +10 Sully Sullenberger →Politics
- 20:4420:44, 24 November 2009 diff hist −5 Sully Sullenberger →Academic life
- 20:4320:43, 24 November 2009 diff hist +13 Sully Sullenberger →Academic life
- 02:3902:39, 24 November 2009 diff hist +4 Talk:United States courts of appeals →Capitalization move
- 02:3902:39, 24 November 2009 diff hist +484 Talk:United States courts of appeals →Capitalization move
- 02:3102:31, 24 November 2009 diff hist +1 Talk:United States courts of appeals →Capitalization move
- 02:1502:15, 24 November 2009 diff hist +25 Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the United States →Retired Associate Justices
- 02:1102:11, 24 November 2009 diff hist +37 Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the United States No edit summary
- 02:0402:04, 24 November 2009 diff hist +10 Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the United States No edit summary
- 02:0102:01, 24 November 2009 diff hist 0 Joseph P. Kennedy Sr. →Kennedy's Arrant Anti-Semitism
- 02:0002:00, 24 November 2009 diff hist +141 Joseph P. Kennedy Sr. →Kennedy's Arrant Anti-Semitism: Frankfurter was on the Supreme Court beginning early in 1939, so he should be mentioned as "Associate Justice Felix Frankfurter".
- 01:5401:54, 24 November 2009 diff hist +139 Joseph P. Kennedy Sr. →Anti-Semitism: A comma was omitted in "Joseph Kennedy, Jr., and other punctuation mistakes. Also, inserting hyperlinks.
- 01:3701:37, 24 November 2009 diff hist 0 Joseph P. Kennedy Sr. →Ambassador to Britain: Correcting typographical errors that I made.
- 01:3501:35, 24 November 2009 diff hist +1,050 Joseph P. Kennedy Sr. →Ambassador to Britain: Inserting omitted information, correcting grammatical mistakes, and spelling out things that should not have been abbreviated.
23 November 2009
- 05:5005:50, 23 November 2009 diff hist +16 Barnard's Star No edit summary
- 05:4005:40, 23 November 2009 diff hist +122 Barnard's Star Abbreviations like "ly" and "pc" should not be used, because frankly, common readers do not know what they mean. They could know what "light year" means.
- 05:2905:29, 23 November 2009 diff hist −4 Barnard's Star This article was full of the pronoun "it" wandering around with not particular antecedent, leaving the reader only to guess. Despite what others might do, American English is still precise about these
- 05:2405:24, 23 November 2009 diff hist −8 Barnard's Star →Claims of a planetary system
- 05:2205:22, 23 November 2009 diff hist +219 Barnard's Star "Hubble Space Telescope" is a proper noun, and it is capitalized all the way through, and perhaps not doing so is a sly insult to NASA ?
- 05:0605:06, 23 November 2009 diff hist +35 Barnard's Star In science and technology "s" is not an acceptable abbreviation for "second", because the letter "s" stands for something alrogether different.
- 05:0005:00, 23 November 2009 diff hist +535 Barnard's Star The flare did not "make" Barnard's Star anything. It might have shown, demonstrated, or presented a fact, but did not make anything.
- 04:3504:35, 23 November 2009 diff hist +359 Talk:Scorpius →Hyth
- 04:3104:31, 23 November 2009 diff hist +508 Talk:Scorpius →What Could This Mean?: new section
- 04:2404:24, 23 November 2009 diff hist +16 Scorpius →Mythology
22 November 2009
- 19:5019:50, 22 November 2009 diff hist +24 Long Island →Geology: It was an omission to not at least mention the phrase "Ice Age".
- 19:2919:29, 22 November 2009 diff hist 0 Qatar →Transportation in Qatar
- 19:2819:28, 22 November 2009 diff hist +625 Qatar Unless otherwise stated, $ (dollar) is understood to mean American dollars. That is the default. Otherwise, Australian dollars, Canadian dollars, etc., will be stated.