User contributions for BeingObjective
A user with 2,885 edits. Account created on 15 October 2023.
17 October 2023
- 22:0222:02, 17 October 2023 diff hist +190 m Siegfried Sassoon Added a citation. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0821:08, 17 October 2023 diff hist −140 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems Citation error. Tags: Reverted references removed Visual edit
- 20:3820:38, 17 October 2023 diff hist −3,833 Siegfried Sassoon →Religion: I deleted a lot of the over worked area of 'why he converted to Catholicism. This section of this article was 'over done' - and not NPOV. I think it is important to note he did so, and as to his motivations - I think the remaining text is sufficient discussion for an NPOV encyclopedic tone. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3020:30, 17 October 2023 diff hist −978 Siegfried Sassoon I changed this section to reflect a more balanced NPOV. The prior edits and quotes from various letters - did not lend any value to this section. The prior edits seemed to just repeat what is well established in prior iterations of this article. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1919:19, 17 October 2023 diff hist +24 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center →Declassified documents: minor rewording. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1519:15, 17 October 2023 diff hist +9 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center →Attacks: Reported attacks... Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1319:13, 17 October 2023 diff hist +19 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center Minor word changes. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4118:41, 17 October 2023 diff hist −23 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems Words Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:3518:35, 17 October 2023 diff hist +763 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems My intention is to really clarify 'who really owns' this company - at the 'get go' - it is discussed deeper into the article but is a little obfuscated by the history and the 'incorporation' dialog. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:0418:04, 17 October 2023 diff hist −251 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems Links? Tags: Reverted references removed Visual edit
- 17:4717:47, 17 October 2023 diff hist +262 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center Added a secondary AP reference supporting the upgrade/refurbishment statement. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3917:39, 17 October 2023 diff hist +654 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems Added products linked to cyber defense technologies... Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 16:5016:50, 17 October 2023 diff hist +5 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems A few . Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 16:4016:40, 17 October 2023 diff hist −563 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems →Notable technologies: Though the examples of the usage of these 'Notable technologies' - are of interest, it does feed into the template statement (now removed) stating this article reads like a promotional ad. I beleive the claims are in the articles on the technologies. I am of the humble opinion removing these also makes this more NPOV article and encyclopedic in tone. As there are linked articles - this content belongs there - really trying to be objective on this matter. Tags: Reverted references removed Visual edit
- 15:4815:48, 17 October 2023 diff hist +116 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Minor clarification of intent. This is a well documented series of events and demonstrates 'changing mindsets' with time. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4415:44, 17 October 2023 diff hist −14 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Word changes. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3815:38, 17 October 2023 diff hist +54 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity →India: Minor change - clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3515:35, 17 October 2023 diff hist −8 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity →Taiwan: Minor language. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3315:33, 17 October 2023 diff hist −144 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity →Taiwan: Cleaned up the language - using more encyclopedic tones and standard English. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2215:22, 17 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity →United States: Minor change - clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1915:19, 17 October 2023 diff hist +257 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Added an internal reference to Mohammed Deif - in order to demonstrate how any given operational 'opacity policy' can be flexible, depending on the circumstance, timing and the country. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:5514:55, 17 October 2023 diff hist +258 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Added a citation relating to the UK's official stance on Nuclear Strikes etc. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4714:47, 17 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Moved the India content to make this a roughly alphabetical list of examples. Did NOT change any content. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4114:41, 17 October 2023 diff hist −54 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Added a little more 'heading structure' to this article. Made NO changes to any content. Moved the reference to East and West Germany in to a section referring to historical application of the strategy - neither country exists and it seemed odd to have this in the core area of examples. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2214:22, 17 October 2023 diff hist +122 User talk:Dan Leonard →NAMER etc.: Reply Tag: Reply
16 October 2023
- 20:4920:49, 16 October 2023 diff hist +259 User talk:Dan Leonard →NAMER etc.: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:4520:45, 16 October 2023 diff hist +388 User talk:Dan Leonard →NAMER etc.: new section Tag: New topic
- 20:4020:40, 16 October 2023 diff hist −175 m Namer Removed the clearly hyperbolic claim - this is not NPOV and is cited from an IDF source from a loose news article. Claiming this vehicle is the MOST ARMOURED of ANY VEHICLE is clearly not accurate nor NPOV. I did try to keep the essence of the claims - but this was not acceptable to another editor - so the whole paragraph should be removed. There is little debate on this - also the use of English is not standard. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0120:01, 16 October 2023 diff hist +4 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Int. Ref. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2319:23, 16 October 2023 diff hist −175 m IDF Achzarit No edit summary Tags: Manual revert Visual edit
- 19:2219:22, 16 October 2023 diff hist +175 m IDF Achzarit No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 19:0819:08, 16 October 2023 diff hist +53 m Namer Left the sentiment of the original author - used standard American English and detuned the apparent hyperbole - left the reference to the IDF claim. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4018:40, 16 October 2023 diff hist −6 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center Modified link and the definition in the link to match this article. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3918:39, 16 October 2023 diff hist −2 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3218:32, 16 October 2023 diff hist +21 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity This references countries that no longer exist - it might be of some historical value in discussing the concept of this article - but perhaps the positions of the current German state might be more useful - I took the liberty of renaming this with a 'historical exhibit' section?? Tag: Visual edit
- 18:2418:24, 16 October 2023 diff hist +31 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1818:18, 16 October 2023 diff hist +133 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Added external link - supporting the statement. Have attempted to define the subject in context to its global usage among policy makers. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5817:58, 16 October 2023 diff hist +204 User talk:BeingObjective →Welcome!: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:5417:54, 16 October 2023 diff hist +11 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Working on semantics! Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5217:52, 16 October 2023 diff hist +57 m Policy of deliberate ambiguity Minor changes - clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:4417:44, 16 October 2023 diff hist +259 Policy of deliberate ambiguity Simplified the opening definition and provided a more limited and descoped article and a 'strong' reference. There might be better references. The subject appears to have been abandoned with little effort after 2008 or so. This was a link from an article on Israel's nuclear weapons 'openness policies' - I do think it is worth improving. Also removed a few odd words used in the original article. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:3812:38, 16 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center caps... Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1902:19, 16 October 2023 diff hist −2 Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center →Attacks: Correct headings - subh 1. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1702:17, 16 October 2023 diff hist 0 Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center →Reported Facility Airspace Incursions: Maintained the same caps style as the rest of the article. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1402:14, 16 October 2023 diff hist +59 m Shimon Peres Negev Nuclear Research Center →Jet aircraft take-down: Minor language change for reasons of clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:2401:24, 16 October 2023 diff hist −10 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems →Notable Technologies: Minor changes - clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:0401:04, 16 October 2023 diff hist −122 m Rafael Advanced Defense Systems →Technological achievements: Very minor language changes, using standard American English. Removed the overt 'promotional' language. Tag: Visual edit
15 October 2023
- 20:2320:23, 15 October 2023 diff hist +37 m Namer Very minor word changes - using standard English. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0820:08, 15 October 2023 diff hist +80 m Nakpadon →History: Clarified the term EKG Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4819:48, 15 October 2023 diff hist +37 m Nakpadon Very minor language changes, using standard English. Tag: Visual edit
