User contributions for 31.50.70.172

21 December 2014

• 01:1901:19, 21 December 2014 diff hist −1 Pass the Pigs bad comma
• 01:0601:06, 21 December 2014 diff hist +12 The Cube (British game show) grammar: it's the doer, not the task itself, that is confined in a box
• 00:3300:33, 21 December 2014 diff hist −2 Butterfly on a Wheel "massive" for non-physical things is rather informal

20 December 2014

• 23:0923:09, 20 December 2014 diff hist +4 PlayStation VR italics
• 08:2408:24, 20 December 2014 diff hist −13 Tiger Balm grammar etc.
• 05:5105:51, 20 December 2014 diff hist +1 Polygyny in Islam →Countries that ban polygyny: avoid run-on sentence
• 05:4705:47, 20 December 2014 diff hist −2 Somalia →Somali Democratic Republic: bad commas
• 03:4603:46, 20 December 2014 diff hist −4 Matthew Haughey Undid revision 633324647 by 24.177.248.76 - fake death date
• 03:4203:42, 20 December 2014 diff hist 0 Jason Calacanis →Netscape.com: you post ON or TO a blog, not AT a blog
• 03:3903:39, 20 December 2014 diff hist +22 Craig Nevill-Manning Froogle is now "Google Shopping"
• 03:3803:38, 20 December 2014 diff hist −21 Google Shopping →Naming: grammar etc.
• 03:1203:12, 20 December 2014 diff hist −3 United States v. Swartz →About the prosecution: "as" doesn't make sense here
• 02:5902:59, 20 December 2014 diff hist +140 Talk:File (command) →Grammar error: Looks good; thanks.
• 02:5802:58, 20 December 2014 diff hist +102 Classic rock since "Dad rock" redirects here, let's mention it: Classic rock is sometimes nicknamed "dad rock", because of its popularity with the older generation.
• 02:5402:54, 20 December 2014 diff hist 0 The Sponge grammar

19 December 2014

• 21:5021:50, 19 December 2014 diff hist −92 List of Scott Pilgrim characters →Bands: 1. no need for brackets. 2. an unnamed band is not (necessarily) an exception to a rule about how bands are named.
• 21:1921:19, 19 December 2014 diff hist 0 The Fox (What Does the Fox Say?) →Production: "Norwegian" has capital N
• 10:2110:21, 19 December 2014 diff hist −3 Sunny Hundal stray "an" (would require "a blogger")
• 10:1710:17, 19 December 2014 diff hist +1 Alain de Botton →Education: comma reqd.
• 07:5007:50, 19 December 2014 diff hist +388 Talk:File (command) →Grammar error: new section
• 07:0307:03, 19 December 2014 diff hist −316 Post-traumatic embitterment disorder →Famous Fiction Characters with PTED, near-PTED, or related syndromes: total original research!
• 06:4606:46, 19 December 2014 diff hist +2 Fat acceptance movement →Legislation: avoid run-on sentence
• 05:5005:50, 19 December 2014 diff hist −4 Johnny Vegas grammar: it's either "his X, Y & Z" or "his X, his Y & his Z"; you can't omit only a subset of "his"es
• 05:4305:43, 19 December 2014 diff hist −6 The Charlotte Church Show →Series 3: number of THINGS. amount of STUFF. but "viewership" sounds better here
• 05:4105:41, 19 December 2014 diff hist −1 Charlotte Church →1998–2005: Classical career: attributive noun "press" works better than awkward apostrophe
• 04:0904:09, 19 December 2014 diff hist +3 Bracknell and Wokingham College →Facilities: style
• 03:3003:30, 19 December 2014 diff hist +3 Love Wrecked grammar
• 00:0400:04, 19 December 2014 diff hist −1 Mobile phone jammer →Legality: grammar: installation is singular

18 December 2014

• 23:5023:50, 18 December 2014 diff hist 0 Marcus Gunn phenomenon caps
• 23:2023:20, 18 December 2014 diff hist −70 Chocolate brownie →Myths about creation: style, avoid sentence fragments
• 19:4119:41, 18 December 2014 diff hist +1 The Cissy →Plot: fix run-on sentence
• 19:4019:40, 18 December 2014 diff hist +4 List of South Park Elementary staff →Principal Victoria: grammar
• 18:1718:17, 18 December 2014 diff hist +454 Talk:Keanu Reeves →Dubious grammar: new section
• 17:1117:11, 18 December 2014 diff hist +28 A House to Let + December 2014 rebroadcast
• 16:4916:49, 18 December 2014 diff hist −7 Colt 45 (malt liquor) →History: not too subtle
• 05:0405:04, 18 December 2014 diff hist +1 The Nightmare Before Christmas →Plot: whom
• 00:3200:32, 18 December 2014 diff hist 0 Europa (1991 film) comma

17 December 2014

• 23:4423:44, 17 December 2014 diff hist −2 The Good Men Project →Good Men Media, Inc.: bad commas
• 21:0921:09, 17 December 2014 diff hist +277 Talk:Tumblr →"Social Justice" bloggers: Agreed; this is enough of a phenomenon to deserve a mention. (Sorry, haven't looked for sources either, but was surprised it wasn't mentioned in the article.)
• 19:2219:22, 17 December 2014 diff hist −7 Shawn Fanning →Computer career: unclear what "up" means here
• 03:0103:01, 17 December 2014 diff hist +5 Sonderkommando →Revolts: grammar, avoid run-on sentence, etc.
• 02:1702:17, 17 December 2014 diff hist −3 Love jihad conspiracy theory rv bad reversion - you can't "do something UNDER an activity". that's not grammatical. not the preposition used in English.
• 01:4701:47, 17 December 2014 diff hist −3 Magic Pockets apostrophe etc.
• 01:3001:30, 17 December 2014 diff hist +1 The Syndicate →American version: comma is vital!! otherwise we are saying that low ratings were the reason for the broadcast!
• 00:5600:56, 17 December 2014 diff hist 0 Kite-flying (politics) "A and B are..." but "A or B is..."
• 00:1500:15, 17 December 2014 diff hist −2 Green Shield Stamps →Popular culture: typos
• 00:1000:10, 17 December 2014 diff hist −6 Turbo Esprit No edit summary

16 December 2014

• 23:5923:59, 16 December 2014 diff hist +1 Tony Saint →Early life: comma reqd
• 22:1422:14, 16 December 2014 diff hist +1 Heavy cake grammar
• 22:0922:09, 16 December 2014 diff hist 0 Desafío (album) caps